Strollin' n' trollin' / Kurt and Polterdot
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Feb 14 2016, 07:15 AM
Naas! Cute little comic :> Looking forward to seeing more from you!
# 3
Posted:
Feb 14 2016, 01:41 AM
The most politest mugging I have ever witnessed.
# 2
Posted:
Feb 14 2016, 01:04 AM
cool wondered wheather you would use this character actually.
so this was a fun read. i really like the use of colours. its simplistic but works. the sky could have used some clouds probably to make it less empty but its all very simple so its fine. page two panel 3 could have wored better with a background colour i think. being the only panel without a bg this looks just like you forgot it.
when it comes to backgrounds i would love to see a little more structure in them. the shabby town looks shabby sure and thats good but some of the lines are a little too careless. page 4 panel 3 would have been good with a little effort but this is sadly a letdown being part of the comics conclusion.
kurt looks like a total badass. maybe even overpowered but his performance is funny that way so i think i actually like it.
overall its a fun comic with a little much carelessness here and there. though for what it was probably meant to be its pretty cool.
so this was a fun read. i really like the use of colours. its simplistic but works. the sky could have used some clouds probably to make it less empty but its all very simple so its fine. page two panel 3 could have wored better with a background colour i think. being the only panel without a bg this looks just like you forgot it.
when it comes to backgrounds i would love to see a little more structure in them. the shabby town looks shabby sure and thats good but some of the lines are a little too careless. page 4 panel 3 would have been good with a little effort but this is sadly a letdown being part of the comics conclusion.
kurt looks like a total badass. maybe even overpowered but his performance is funny that way so i think i actually like it.
overall its a fun comic with a little much carelessness here and there. though for what it was probably meant to be its pretty cool.
# 1
Posted:
Feb 13 2016, 10:31 PM
Sorry for the delay in putting this up! I haven't been able to really look at the site due to work so I missed this!
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Feb 21st, 2016
Votes Cast:
20
Page Views:
1213
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