Mortas vs. Mortido

Mortas vs. Mortido


438 points
Page 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6Page 7



486 points
Page 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6Page 7Page 8Page 9Page 10Page 11




Critiques & Comments
Please register or log in to comment


PyrasTerran
Community Manager
icon
1377 comments
# 26   Posted: Sep 17 2015, 10:31 PM
Alrighty off the bat: Both of you I had trouble distinguishing your own character's scar in your own comics in the first read, maybe it's just me~

Karlorowe: Very strong first comic! I think one thing you should work on is your line-variation, or just making them feel more organic; sometimes when your lines get too thin they feel too digital, like I can see the aliasing wanting to come in.

Choleric: Visually you're becoming my favorite artist on the site, sometimes it's a little hard to see what's happening in your fights but this one was a bit more on the clear side so that's great! And no I'm not just going easy cause of the Vektran love~

Great job both of you~

Cracking Skulls
Global Moderator
icon
339 comments
# 25   Posted: Sep 16 2015, 06:15 PM
Jong: Jesus Christ dude, you never fail to bring your inking skills to the game, your pages are extremely detailed and the pacing is nuts. As much as I love your work tho, I do have to say it was getting a tad bit cluttered with details and hatching, that it was difficult to tell what Mort's scar was. It's nice to put those on your work, but try pulling it back just a bit so clarity isn't an issue for you in the future. You had some tight action scenes in your comic, so I'd love to see more of it in the future (Of course I will :'D)

Karl: Holy shit dude, what an impression! I love how you jumped right into this sort of battle to begin with, so props to you! Mortas' dialogue is pretty entertaining, along with a jerk personality this time around, I'd say he's becoming another favorite of mine!
Your battle was more easier to read imo, with clear distinction between backgrounds, characters, and effects, but I have the impression that backgrounds had less of a priority on some pages than say, your first page, but it's not that big of deal since you did do your best to keep backgrounds going for as long as you could. That's honestly all I can say, you did great!

nice job to the two of you!

Shen
Global Moderator
icon
1217 comments
# 24   Posted: Sep 15 2015, 11:16 PM
karl- theres a lot of great stuff here! i like your panels and you do awesome effects. a library is a great setting and i like how you utilized it. your black and white is good but the line weights are all either way too thin or way too thick in my opinion. the scar mortas gets in yours is difficult to discern even on several read-throughs. but shit, man, i applaud you for getting into a double scar match with Jong your very first fight! welcome to Void!
jong- dude you already know this is fucking great XD fantastic action, fantastic backgrounds- FANTASTIC scar on mortas, holy shit BATFACE, that is so damn creative! I also really enjoy how you write him as a character, and weave him into Mortido's ongoing arc. My one nitpick is I had a hard time figuring out where Mortido's scar was until you explained it. otherwise, near perfect comic!
great job, guys!

Heathen
Artist
icon
208 comments
# 23   Posted: Sep 15 2015, 02:51 PM
The Bent One: Bat-cave face scar is the greatest thing I have ever seen on this site.
Quote
I'm inclined to agree with this.  I can't wait to see how Karlorowe incorporates it into Mortas' subsequent comics.  (I have at least one idea, Karlorowe, if you're interested).

The Bent One
Artist
icon
562 comments
# 22   Posted: Sep 14 2015, 05:23 PM
Bat-cave face scar is the greatest thing I have ever seen on this site.

Pixelchop
Artist
icon
139 comments
# 21   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 11:50 AM
I enjoyed the comics from both artists. It was cool to see how you chose to interpret each other's character.
Choleric: I like the style you chose to use and how you worked with light and dark in many of your pages. However there were a few times where I feel there may not have been enough variation and it made it hard to distinguish what was going on in the panel. For example page 4 panel 3.
Karlorowe: Very solid entry. I dug the establishing shot with a book shelves, it gave me a sense of where they were. Nice clean work. I would have liked a little more contrast with tones throughout  the comic. The movement was nice and I like the how you solved the problem of them meeting each other. Changing location was also a cool idea. Overall I got a good read from both artists and it looks like they had fun working on their comics. I'm looking forward to seeing more comics from both of you guys.

karlorowe
Artist
icon
4 comments
# 20   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 11:16 AM
Holy crap choleric, this is so damn beautiful,  please just draw my characters forever! I love it! Also I'm gonna mangle the shit out of Mortas's face that was such an awesome way to give him a scar !

graphicDREAMER
Artist
icon
22 comments
# 19   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 11:08 AM
i was waiting all week for this and you didnt disappoint!

Chimaeric
Artist
icon
247 comments
# 18   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 10:26 AM
Mortido gets gutted in page 5

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
icon
1377 comments
# 17   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 10:25 AM
So the stomach injury is the scar on your comic as well?

Chimaeric
Artist
icon
247 comments
# 16   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 10:04 AM
apparently we had similar ideas for the scars. I think it works.

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
icon
1377 comments
# 15   Posted: Sep 12 2015, 10:01 AM
k before i say anything I need to confirm what everyone's scar

karlorowe the scars are mortido on his stomach and mortas over his eye?

and choleric, mortas' scar is that batcave face but what about mortido?

Astro Sean
Think Tank
icon
280 comments
# 14   Posted: Sep 5 2015, 11:07 AM
Straight to business

Red
Council
icon
632 comments
# 13   Posted: Sep 4 2015, 10:23 AM
hot damnnnnn!

Darius Corry
Artist
icon
426 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 3 2015, 08:40 AM
whoa. WHOA!

Hiemie
Artist
icon
511 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 06:31 PM
You guys are great.

Heathen
Artist
icon
208 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 04:02 PM
Voting hasn't even ended on the intro.

This is how you Void.

Cracking Skulls
Global Moderator
icon
339 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 03:25 PM
SIIIIIIIIICK

PyrasTerran
Community Manager
icon
1377 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 01:44 PM
GUNS BLAZING

Minteh
Artist
icon
250 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:50 AM
OHH. WHAT A WELCOME. I'm super hyped for this!

graphicDREAMER
Artist
icon
22 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:40 AM
hold it down for the newbies Karlorowe. I believe in Mortas!!!!!

Chimaeric
Artist
icon
247 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:36 AM
October is here.

Ten Dead Kings
Artist
icon
268 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:35 AM
Y'all cray.

karlorowe
Artist
icon
4 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:31 AM
oh lord im actually pretty nervous haha

Thresher
Artist
icon
166 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:06 AM
THIS IS HOW LEGENDS ARE BORN

neens
Think Tank
icon
259 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 28 2015, 11:06 AM
2 SCARE 2 SPOOP

Comic Details -

 
Type: Double Scar Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Sep 18th, 2015
Votes Cast: 21
Page Views: 804
Winner: Chimaeric

 

Add to Playlist -

 
 

Newest Comments -


Newest Characters -

 
KotSister KiteriaGhostThe Abominable Dr. HoangAshlanEgg DealerAstroleoAzu FloresSehemaThe ProfessorsTiffanyShmagic
 

Open Challenges -


Random Comic -



Latest Topics -

 
All News, All The Time 
Last updated: Staff Bot - Sep 19, 2018, 10:18 PM
Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE) 
Last updated: Shen - Sep 17, 2018, 10:52 PM
SilverBlaze's Incubation pod 
Last updated: ArtsandGoodies - Sep 14, 2018, 09:54 PM
INTRODUCE YOURSELF 
Last updated: MightyMayhem - Sep 14, 2018, 04:38 PM
Challenges Thread 
Last updated: Dechado - Sep 12, 2018, 11:42 AM
 

Latest Members -


Users online -

 
49 Guests, 3 Users


[]

Most Online Today: 79.
Most Online Ever: 1,050 (Aug 30, 2015, 03:43 AM)

 

Original site Copyright 2002-2017 Kevin Birtcher All characters and content Copyright 2002-2017 their respective owners Theme by SMFTricks - Modified by Brittney Scott & Jordan Bobo