Intro Story / Cecilia Demeas

Intro Story — Cecilia Demeas

by Wubble


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Bobo
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# 7   Posted: Jul 27 2012, 11:59 AM
I'm loving your coloring, and look forward to your first comic match! Some of the dialogue feels a little stiff to me, but I think that's something you can work on pretty easily and just get used to over time. Keep it up!

Pocketmouse
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# 6   Posted: Jul 26 2012, 11:42 PM
I really love to see how far this progressed. The addition of colour has really strengthened it too; The tones you've used are one of my favorite things about the whole piece.

As for what you could work on, I'd say whatever you're using to ink this isn't working for you; if I were you I would try out different brushes or quills (I'm pretty sure it's digital but play about with the settings until you find one that really works). I feel like your line art isn't done with confidence, so find something you love to work with and get confident about doing it :')

If you really get trouble from that you have your evidently excellent use of colour to fall back on; it might be an idea to use the colour to give your image definition (contrast will appear to be a line) and then use line afterwards to pick out the bits that need a little extra.

Having said all that, I really do like where this is going, the panel with her falling and the tracker moving about is most excellent and I'm really looking forward to your battle! Good luck!

Video320
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# 5   Posted: Jul 24 2012, 11:16 PM
Yeah, I saw this when it was nothing but sketches. It came along nicely, especially the coloring. Great job!

Wubble
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# 4   Posted: Jul 24 2012, 09:59 PM
@The BenT One: As to what it really is, will be elaborated further in the incoming battles :)

Wubble
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# 3   Posted: Jul 24 2012, 09:07 PM
The BenT One: Ah, good to see this character officially on the site! This came a long way from what you originally had. I was a little confused about the tracker. what is it? why does it randomly appear and why does Cecilia know what it is?

I assume you will address this in your coming battles.
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Ah, I was afraid that detail was too small - she finds the tracker-thing attached to radar ("Wait! There's something under the radar plate...") and while she was reaching over the radar to get it the lightning strikes  - and then falls with it in her  (right) hand, but loses apparently grip of it. The badge-tracker-thing falls next to her and the bars in the thing start lighting up (this was a clue to Cecilia that it might be some sort of tracker)

The Bent One
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# 2   Posted: Jul 24 2012, 04:01 PM
Ah, good to see this character officially on the site! This came a long way from what you originally had. I was a little confused about the tracker. what is it? why does it randomly appear and why does Cecilia know what it is?

I assume you will address this in your coming battles.

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# 1   Posted: Jul 24 2012, 02:49 PM
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