Elle vs. Jane Blonde
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Jul 16 2012, 02:01 PM
Mister Kent: I liked the story. I haven't followed Jane Blonde, but you still managed to make me want to read the end of this comic... which it looks like you didn't quite get to! I was disappointed that it was apparently unfinished, but at least you left me wanting more, so props to you, man! I hope I get to see more from both of you.
# 6
Posted:
Jul 13 2012, 10:39 PM
i'm still workikng on this I swear
# 5
Posted:
Jun 15 2012, 03:37 PM
Two of my favorite gals drawn by two of my favorite artists.
Time for some nails to the whales!
Time for some nails to the whales!
# 4
Posted:
Jun 15 2012, 01:16 PM
REDEEM YOUR LOST HONOR!!! lol
# 3
Posted:
Jun 15 2012, 12:36 PM
DO IT tdk! This is your chance!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 15 2012, 12:30 PM
No turning back now :I
# 1
Posted:
Jun 15 2012, 12:28 PM
ROCK IT
Scar Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jul 20th, 2012
Votes Cast:
17
Page Views:
1414
Winner:
Mister Kent
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The story's nice, with good humour, and you did manage to make it as far as needed to at least get an idea of all that happened, so that it works even if unfinished. You probably already know thins, but; more environements! It took me a while to realize that they got outside, even with Elle stating it! And no idea where Elle is at all (except it's red)
On a similar note, I'd like to see you try pulling out the camera a bit more often. I know how hard it can be to resist the close-up/bust shot, but I think it can pay off.
But a fun read, as always.
ps. on a more "personal satisfaction" note, I love how gross you made Elle's scar look.