Intro Story / Leo Johnson

Intro Story — Leo Johnson

by TKDZen


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Fed
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# 8   Posted: Jun 17 2012, 12:19 PM
This was great quality artwise, I love your hatchings - can't wait to see more from you!

Bobo
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# 7   Posted: Jun 14 2012, 02:50 PM
I really love his fro! I like the linework, too, but I'm not a huge fan of the font you're using. Maybe check out blambot.com for some slightly more legible ones, and make sure the text is in a box instead of just floating over the characters with a white border like on the last few panels. Of course, that's all up to your personal style, but those are my 2 cents!

Energy
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# 6   Posted: Jun 12 2012, 04:21 PM
Looking really good!  I love the action and backgrounds.  I hope to see Leo in action soon.

Dx2
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# 5   Posted: Jun 12 2012, 11:39 AM
 Not bad, not bad. I'm digging the Fist of the North Star style action and linework. Good looking backgrounds too!

TKDZen
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# 4   Posted: Jun 11 2012, 06:25 PM
Atomicfish: His master is Stinkmeaner? Sold! I want more Leo!
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lol yeah, in his preliminary design, he was supposed to be a mix of Uncle Ruckus, Stinkmeaner, and Sho-nuff.  I need to change it though, if i plan on using this story for publication, I need to have a more original design

Shen
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# 3   Posted: Jun 11 2012, 10:29 AM
oh, hes through! Nice! I like this guy, can't wait to see him fight!

Atomicfish
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# 2   Posted: Jun 11 2012, 10:08 AM
His master is Stinkmeaner? Sold! I want more Leo!

Kinu
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# 1   Posted: Jun 11 2012, 08:25 AM
Hellz Yaaaaaah! Go NICK!

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