Intro Story / Mr. Creamy

Intro Story — Mr. Creamy

by Hiemie


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TINMAN
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# 16   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 09:30 PM
We oughta battle somewhen or when in the very near future.

      Edited Apr 9 2012,  09:31 PM by TINMAN

TINMAN
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# 15   Posted: Apr 9 2012, 09:30 PM
AWW hey now. You know I love me some Mister Creamy and his creepy effects are in full effect here. It's cool leaving some things mysterious, having seen the guy in action previously, I can't wait to see more of him. Genuinely terrifying and good presentation with the narrative. I think you could provide for more of a terror filled pacing with some spaces and enjambed panels but its all gravy baby.

Zest
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# 14   Posted: Apr 8 2012, 03:11 PM
Super creepy, and a very cool premise. Can't wait to see some battles with this guy!

Mister Kent
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# 13   Posted: Apr 5 2012, 01:34 PM
Whoo-hoo! Creamy enters the Void. As usual, I appreciate your darkness.

JoshuaEliGilley
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# 12   Posted: Apr 5 2012, 08:12 AM
awesome.

Gibbo
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# 11   Posted: Apr 3 2012, 02:45 AM
Is it weird that I particularly liked the 'melting people' frame from this? Powerfully creepy stuff, certainly keen to see more of this character!

Evil Eye
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# 10   Posted: Apr 3 2012, 02:17 AM
sigh.  seeing my critique counter get busted back down to "3" makes me a sad panda.  Well, 4 now.  You get me.

Evil Eye
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# 9   Posted: Apr 3 2012, 02:16 AM
There is something tremendously evocative about the premise here.  And the punchy way you did your writing in microscopic sentences and even a lot of single words emphasizes the dread so well.  Like a phantom poking you in the heart, or something.

Although I suppose you mighth ave sacrificed a bit of perspective for more things going on in each panel, the counterpoint I offer is that I think it fills the boardwalk with more life.  Which of course flies in perfect contrast to what Void City will know the Boardwalk as from now on.  I quite liked that.  I think it was a worthwhile trade.

slothvert
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# 8   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 02:39 PM
Yes.


That is all.

DelBarrio
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# 7   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 02:07 PM
Derp.

      Edited Apr 2 2012,  02:07 PM by DelBarrio

DelBarrio
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# 6   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 02:07 PM
Honestly? A little bland, but at least gives us an idea of where Mr. Creamy originated. I feel like you kinda rushed this one, haha. I know you can do better. I still love this character and can't wait to see him in action. :] Your artwork does lend itself well to creepiness.

Shen
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# 5   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 12:59 PM
lol I have no idea what I just read. I think I liked it, though. Very creative intro!

ShouldaCouldaCola
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# 4   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 10:44 AM
Awesome character! Love the backstory.

Qyzex
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# 3   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 10:05 AM
Not your best work, but it's still very good. I'm hoping these comics go along the lines of how you drew your Suit comics, since those were some of the best I've ever seen from you. Good job

Thresher
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# 2   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 09:10 AM
My one major problem with this is that it's quite flat. You sacrifice perspective to fill up your panels with more things (i.e. the first panel). However that seems to be what you're going for, and although it doesn't work for me personally it's your bag.
Beyond that, I love the concept and how you wrote it.

purplemuffin
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# 1   Posted: Apr 2 2012, 07:57 AM
Nice! Hehe, I like it.

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