Bleak / Trix

Bleak — Trix

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# 5   Posted: Jan 13 2012, 07:35 PM
kozispoon: ...That's it?

I feel like I've been popped into the middle of a comic and only given a couple pages. How does it end? What's going on? Is this just an ongoing tale which requires the reading of previous battles?
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I wasn't really confident with how much room I had to tell a story, so I wrote it really minimalist. Probably too minimalist, in retrospect (obviously). I feel the need to work on my panels and how much detail I can fit into a page.

I think this was good for me to get something actually done, and I hope to improve upon this in future comics.

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# 4   Posted: Jan 12 2012, 08:33 PM
...That's it?

I feel like I've been popped into the middle of a comic and only given a couple pages. How does it end? What's going on? Is this just an ongoing tale which requires the reading of previous battles?

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# 3   Posted: Dec 29 2011, 08:42 AM
You have engaging angles which work well with what you're trying to illustrate however you need to work your compositions a bit more so each of your panels feel filled and have weight for all the space they're taking up.

Some panels can have a modicum of empty space but often that is balanced with filled engaging panels that are on the same space.

Really just DRAW more draw more and edit down.

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# 2   Posted: Dec 27 2011, 02:43 PM
I wish you hadn't done the contrast that way. I honestly don't like the grainy way it made it look. And I'd like to see you use more line variation bro(anatomy, facial shapes, noses. Sorry bro. Just being honest) I also wish you'd made it feel more like it had an end.

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# 1   Posted: Dec 26 2011, 12:37 PM
All pages uploaded! (Well, I uploaded them as soon as I started this)

Thanks Angie for all your help. Hope everyone enjoys the comic.

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