Damnit Rofl.
Tdk - Nice stuff for the most part. I think your work could definitely benefit from tones or shading, everything is very flat and without a lot of the detail in the lineart, things appear pretty lifeless. Some more fluidity and detail/variation in your line widths would go a loooong way, and tones would help boost it up too. Of course I realize this is a tournament and perhaps those are things you should experiment in normal battles with. I'd also change out that text, it makes the entire comic feel very MS-paint-esque to me for whatever reason, its not terrible, but not pleasing either. Keep it up though dude.
Fear vs. Subject Miller
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# 6
Posted:
Dec 14 2011, 09:29 PM
# 5
Posted:
Dec 14 2011, 07:51 AM
Uploaded for original derpitude.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 14 2011, 06:08 AM
Pass judgment as you want, I can't salvage this shit from the first round as much as I'd like to.
If I somehow move on, I'll do something there, but with no supporting first round, I had no clue where to go with this.
If I somehow move on, I'll do something there, but with no supporting first round, I had no clue where to go with this.
# 3
Posted:
Dec 13 2011, 01:51 AM
Haha oh wow this is so rushed it's not even funny :V
Uploadeing later.
Uploadeing later.
# 2
Posted:
Dec 9 2011, 01:38 AM
More robot girl comics = me happy.
# 1
Posted:
Dec 8 2011, 09:45 PM
^__^ yay!
Death Match
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2 weeks
Ended:
Dec 20th, 2011
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tdk: Wow, the story here is actually really great, probably the best I've read of you. Listen to Orange/Jax/Nightmare's notes and your next one should be solid.