Intro Story / The Spectrum

Intro Story — The Spectrum


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Kuro
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# 3   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 08:32 PM
It was an ok start. I want to see what you have in mind for this guy. Something that jumped out at me is the composition & the way you're framing your shots in panels. Picking different angles & zooms would've cut down on so much unnecessary space. I mean you did fill in backgrounds & that's good, but like in the wide panel where the hood's threatening him, why does that need to stretch across the page wide? If so, why do we have to be 20 feet away? It makes the audience feel removed.

Chia
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# 2   Posted: Feb 1 2011, 07:26 PM
Love the intro! Pages were easy to follow with my eyes and pleasing with the details. Though with page 3/4 I didn't like that you put in those saturated colors, it just didn't fit in. If you left that in sepia it would've looked nicer.

Nice job nonetheless.

The Bent One
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# 1   Posted: Jan 30 2011, 01:19 PM
I like this character. A LOT.

The only criticism I can think of now is the sepia gradients vs the super saturated colors on the Hoods' clothing. It's distracting, and out of place after the gradients.

VOID needs more mindless monsters to fight.

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