Suit vs. Corry

Suit vs. Corry

by Hiemie


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E.W. Schneider
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# 31   Posted: Dec 27 2010, 10:46 AM
Hiemie: Great to see you doing another battle.

Your story is great. It actually kind of feels like a parallel to your first fight with Suit. The dialogue feels creepily similar, although I'm sure you didn't intend it that way. Your hobo signs was a nice touch that only you got ultimately. (I never would have known if you didn't point it out to me.) I liked the direction and reasoning for Corry to go out into the world to find Suit, too. It felt natural. The entire story to me was really good. Another nice entry in the tales of Suit.

Your art was top notch for this fight. I really loved your snow effects in this comic. Especially the last panel on page 1, it gives it this grainy aged feeling to it. Your colors were A+, once again and you had awesome emotion from everyone.

Your posing is still kind of stiff, however this also has the best movement and action from you that I have ever seen. The fighting from Corry against Suit was awesome, the line of motion really helped for the fist and the shovel. I think in the future that'd be a good path to pursue.

I really enjoyed this fight and I don't know if Corry finishing would have had me not voting for you in the long run. This was a great effort and you did a super job.

Mrnoitaull: Hey, too bad. But what you did turn in was great stuff.

I enjoyed the story you went with here, although it'd also have been kind of funny if he ended up just busting in on a married couple doing it. However, progression of story dictates Corry knew she was being raped. (Not knocking it, just a funny thought.) This looked like it was going to be a good set up, shame it wasn't fully fleshed out.

I think you need to have more contrast with your watercolors. The first page is kind of weak, but you corrected this all second page and onwards. The penultimate panel's 'rain' on page 2 is very exceptional looking. The final suit you drew is absolutely awesome looking, I love the connected shadow there. Biggest strength you got, man.

You have so many cool ideas that you could be expressing but a lot of it just ends up untouched because of you not getting to the finish line. If you can overcome this, you're gonna be solid, although, void's just for fun too, so don't shoot yourself over it. Next time, try making an easy start and end and go with it.

This was another good comic though. I hope your next one is even better.

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# 30   Posted: Dec 26 2010, 08:10 AM
Hiemie:
Angie must have some MEAN pheromones cus everyone's after her LOL.
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Cats spray that shit everywhere.
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Hahhha! True true!

E.W. Schneider
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# 29   Posted: Dec 23 2010, 10:07 AM
EDIT: critique to be given. Damn phone keyboard.

      Edited Dec 23 2010,  10:07 AM by E.W. Schneider

E.W. Schneider
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# 28   Posted: Dec 23 2010, 10:07 AM
Ignore this doublepost.

      Edited Dec 23 2010,  10:08 AM by E.W. Schneider

Wolcik
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# 27   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 11:23 AM
Mrnoitaull and Hime both have diffrent styles and it's shows. Mrnoitaull loses a lot when his characters have just a little of disproportion or perspective flaw (because of photo like nature of drawnings), while Hime draws very cartoony and nobody expects perfect in that.

Storywise Hime has a finished thing and their confrontation is done for now, but Mrnoitaull didn't give us anything after that girl died as if she was the main character and whenever Corry decide to hurt Suit or Suit runs away still should be covered.

Hiemie
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# 26   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 11:19 AM
Angie must have some MEAN pheromones cus everyone's after her LOL.
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Cats spray that shit everywhere.

Darius Corry
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# 25   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 10:05 AM
To be honest, I appreciate Hiemie's side and im sorry i couldnt follow through with the battle's stipulation.
I love creative swerves. Forces the gears to turn. Story was nifty as well, Angie must have some MEAN pheromones cus everyone's after her LOL.

Hiemie
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# 24   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 08:21 AM
GentlemanGhost: Corry's piece was much stronger than Hiemie's... shame it's not reflected in the voting!
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So why was it stronger? That way I can improve in the future.

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# 23   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 07:36 AM
Good submission from both... looks good Corry! Almost drew some backgrounds!!

Revelarts
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# 22   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 05:52 AM
@Brian
I understand what your saying but
I didn't say that they "sucked". Just saying that it's not a fav genre 4 me.
Like a music critic saying that they don't really like country western, I'm  just being up front about it.
I think I judged them 1st on the storytelling and art etc. without bias, but entertainment wise, because i personally find few serial killer stories "entertaining" , i went a lil lower.

I want to give honest feedback, and letting them know that others could probably give higher numbers in the entertainment dept. but here's my reason why -I- didn't . So they don't feel it's something about the work itself seems fair to me. Rather than trying to suddenly pretend to "like" or be "open too" the subject matter.

I'm pretty new here ,I don't know If it's better not to vote on things like that, I'll stop voting if so, and just post comments for what they're worth.
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Anywho,
Mrhoit I also want to add, I like your use of lighting in a lot of areas the shadows and silhouettes work! the sound effects Choices are cool but the rendering of the last one on page 3, it think could have been moved out from under the text boxes or enlarged. I really like the soft textured walls. and Bgrounds. Nice x-ray view AS WELL.

HieMie that opening panel is great. REALLY striking. well done. The 2 panels where Suit grabs his shovel and hits Corry didn't read to me at 1st. Not sure if it's me or if in the 2nd panel a little more of the shovel could be shown in the follow through.


      Edited Dec 22 2010,  06:02 AM by Revelarts

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# 21   Posted: Dec 22 2010, 03:34 AM
Revelarts: serial killer. dark. Not my fav genre. so I'v rated them both lower than i would if the subject was different.

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this is like saying a horror movie sucks because its a horror movie. i don't think that a genre should affect ones voting. please be a little more open. we want to keep void a constructive environment that accepts anyone. the voting is meant to help someone get better and tell them where their weakness' are. not that the genre they like to portray is not a favorite.

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# 20   Posted: Dec 21 2010, 09:19 PM
I enjoyed the read of both stories, but I must say Mrnoit you definitely had a great twist toward the end. Himie, the coloring was awesome in each and every panel.

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# 19   Posted: Dec 21 2010, 08:58 PM
serial killer. dark. Not my fav genre. so I'v rated them both lower than i would if the subject was different.

Himie Love the colors and the handling of text especially. layouts are cool the art style works.
Mrnoit...nicely done. rendering pretty good seems a in a couple spots I fell you dropped the ball in that dept. a couple of the faces are a bit off. Suits face at the end has the emtion but somehow it looks, a bit foe some reason.


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# 18   Posted: Dec 20 2010, 09:23 PM
oh wow that was rough. good job you two its so dark. Hiemie, suit is ridiculous and so believable as a character nicely done. good job with yours as well Mrnoitaull i was not expecting that twist at the end

Darius Corry
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# 17   Posted: Dec 20 2010, 07:19 AM
Hiemie, it's both.

Mister Kent
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# 16   Posted: Dec 20 2010, 01:48 AM
Very nice continuity in yours Hiemie - and I really liked your interpretation of Corry

Yours had a killer ending MrNoitall - and i loved Suit's suit!

Hiemie
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# 15   Posted: Dec 19 2010, 11:11 PM
Hey, it happens. You side does look nice. Are you gonna do the last pages of your fight? I'd enjoy seeing them if you do.

btw, is that inkwash or watercolor?

Darius Corry
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# 14   Posted: Dec 19 2010, 11:10 PM
Yeah I'm sorry, Hiemie. I swore I had one more day left. This is def not how I intended for this to end.

Hiemie
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# 13   Posted: Dec 18 2010, 10:19 PM
I uploaded a complete comic, but I plan on doing a bonus page tomorrow before deadline. So please, if Corry finishes ahead of time, don't upload yet.

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# 12   Posted: Dec 7 2010, 01:37 PM
Whoopie.

Qyzex
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# 11   Posted: Nov 27 2010, 11:08 AM
exciting! :D I loves me some Suit

Fox24
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# 10   Posted: Nov 23 2010, 07:38 PM
ouch can anyone say colonoscopy. Jk let's get down and dirty

Fox24
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# 9   Posted: Nov 23 2010, 07:38 PM
ouch can anyone say colonoscopy. Jk let's get down and dirty

Wolcik
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# 8   Posted: Nov 22 2010, 01:56 AM
sounds great :)

Mister Kent
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# 7   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 08:05 PM
Love it!

Charlie
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# 6   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 07:06 PM
YAY

Fetus Man
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# 5   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 06:41 PM
Hahahaha.

hahaha.


hah!

Awesome!

Zest
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# 4   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 05:03 PM
AW YEAH~

E.W. Schneider
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# 3   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 04:57 PM
YEAH BOY, WE GONNA GET US SOME HEAVY LIQUOR TONIGHT

fowlie
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# 2   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 04:56 PM
UH OH

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 1   Posted: Nov 21 2010, 04:56 PM
My oh my!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Scar Match
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Dec 26th, 2010
Votes Cast: 26
Page Views: 1373
Winner: Hiemie

 

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