FissionMailed: Haha nice comic dude. Maybe would have liked to see more of your opponents in this, but hey - they pulled a no show so no worries there I guess haha! Good luck in the next round bro
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FissionMailed: Haha nice comic dude. Maybe would have liked to see more of your opponents in this, but hey - they pulled a no show so no worries there I guess haha! Good luck in the next round bro
angieness:haven: wtf this is taking so long! i have work in an hour and i want to read battles!
no fun!Quote
I'll never put the comics up now Haven. Thanks for ruining Christmas!
haven: wtf this is taking so long! i have work in an hour and i want to read battles!
no fun!
einsam
Colbitzer
@ 3:32 PM Apr 17th
Birthright
Saal, Louise Ambre-Aliona, and Llaana
@ 3:44 PM Apr 16th
Help Needed
Theakon
@ 2:19 PM Apr 16th
The Great Switcheroo
Louise Ambre-Aliona vs. Luniel Gekka
@ 3:26 AM Apr 15th
The Great Switcheroo
Colbitzer vs. Veruca Chance
@ 5:22 PM Apr 14th
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You have terrific movement and pacing with regards to the story, as well. It really picks up from where your last comic ended and it really could just continue from where you left off by removing that 'to be continued' text. You cut right to the chase and the action is really satisfying and reminds me of the game 'Left 4 Dead'. I would love to see this kind of action from you more, cause I think you're getting a knack for it.
I think your props could use a little work, though. The gun feels a little phoned in, but guns are man-made objects can be tricky, so I can understand that. I also think a little more variation or shading with the grays would help enhance this piece as well.
Opponents. This was really lacking in that field. This comic would be a solid A if it was a Beyond Battle, but this isn't gonna work out next round for you, if you keep this up. If we had covered up the name of your opponents, it literally could have been anyone you showed, so make sure you devote more time to including them, not just cameos!
All in all, I think you got a bit lucky here, but this was seriously a terrific comic. I'm really excited to see your semi-finals entry and I hope you fix your issues to make us an MG-class effort!
Vain: Bummer. I hope we see something nice from you again, soon.