William_Duel: Shade complains that there is no prompt for the scarecrow to attack Madelyn but from what I figure, he's zombie too as your version of Oz is full of zombie munchkins and Nevermore's cry of brains leads me to believe this but perhaps it's too subtle?
Some good advice I've often heard here on Void is, assume your audience is dumb as shit (because half the time it's true) so don't assume they'll understand the situation from subtle things or simple points in the dialogue.
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Will, it's not about the subtle hint in the dialogue. It just simply doesn't work as a concept. We can assume the munchkins *can* be zombies because they are/were fleshy living midgets. A scarecrow isn't and the explanation of how it could be would just be too far reaching.
Also, I really hope the latter comment isn't a jab at my abilities to read a comic. That's a fast way to turn me off.
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I'm always up for pushing myself to work harder. I will try cleaning up my lines next time, but I always strive to keep my style simple and clear.
As for the story, it's not meant to be taken seriously. It's definitely something that I wanted to be silly, that the scarecrow's attack was unwarranted. Next time, I'll take the opponent's character and personality more into consideration.