Holy crap Punk jax I missed your first battle? D:

@Roger: Haha, I'm actually pretty disappointed, dude. I expected a better excuse at least, bro. :'D But in all seriousness, the randomness of your comic makes it funny enough to like yours better than my own. :3c I love your linework, I'm just mad you didn't have more. :C

@Everyone who read my poorly made comic: Sorry for the bad quality. My parents' 25th anniversary is coming and there was a rush time to pack everything to bring over to Mexico which just happened to cross over during this comic's drawing time. Thus, this left me only a day for actual drawing. The original rough sketch had more details (though still no shading, I should work on that) but I realized I ran out of time when I literally inked and submitted the comic as our ride to the airport rode up. I really hope Void teaches (read:forces) me to organize my time better.

@Those who critiqued: Thanks! I always love critique.

oh, and @Kuro: I love drawing, I'll prove it to you in my next comic, I promise. ;0;

Eh... I guess both of these were OK, but I think that there could of been a bit more effort into these comics? You shouldn't be afraid to push yourself folks, in fact, that's strongly encouraged!

Jax, there's no real backgrounds, or shading for the sparse line work & a lot of panels seemed to crop or zoom not for effect, but only to save you from drawing. I couldn't grasp what happened. And when some thing was happening, you'd draw it super tiny & not give it the space it deserved. Do you not like drawing?

Roger, to me, this kinda comes of as a default. I mean the minimum was three comic pages & you're only giving us one page of comics here. A rather uneventful one with messy lines. Sorry if you didn't get the time, but instead of playing with covers & such, you could have given us more comic to work with.

On a lighter note and completely random I like how you did the moobs on Massimo and I wish I used Max more. Jax you did great for your first character comic and I wish you good luck.

Thanks.

This has to be one of the most bizarre fights I've read so far...

Jax: Nice intro into Void. The lack of shading made it a little difficult to tell locations apart, but I could follow the story easily enough... though, to be fair, that was certainly a confusing story. Well done nonetheless!

Roger_mild: Ouch, yeah. Managing time is a bitch. I'll crit what you had, though: Nice lines! The setting was simple and the gag was short, but it was interesting enough to read. I'm confident that with practice and more time you could make a better product for us.

I uploaded. it's terrible. I need to manage my time better. Sorry, dudezes!

I will do better in any future battles I have, I SWEAR! QYZEX WILL BEAT ME UNTIL I DO IT!

Submitted.

Rushed comic is better than no comic. I'm leaving to Mexico RIGHT AT THIS MOMENT, BYE.

Welcome back Roger! Just remember to do your best here folks, the minimum is a mere 3 pages too! And yes I am going to say this to everybody.

good luck duders!

Good luck the both of you!