Vacation Tyme / Jack

Vacation Tyme — Jack

by odd13


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JoshuaEliGilley
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# 8   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 11:26 PM
lol @ ur thumbs and good job Odd. I like your hand lettering better than fonts though.
and the transparent word box/bubble :/
your drawings are sweet. I like your characterizations here.

Dimension
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# 7   Posted: Feb 25 2010, 07:59 PM
haha, cute story! :3 I personally didn't like the font for this though, it was pixely in some areas and not really fitting I guess. I'd also like to see you move on to bigger page sizes and cleaner line work, but that's entirely up to you. Nice comic though, I found the expressions to be really funny! :D

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# 6   Posted: Feb 23 2010, 07:24 AM
funny XD

there were just a few places that tripped me up; page2, panel 2 & page 8, panel 1... I was just confused about bubble order in those. And this could've been just me, but I didn't get that Jack was staring between Ben's legs in page 5.. maybe it's because there was a lot of stuff and details in those panels that I couldn't put it together at first.

I really like the little side-jokes thrown in, like the fuzzy pet thing jumping down a hole and Leviatorah chilling on top of a building. :D

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# 5   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 08:41 PM
:DDDD

odd13
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# 4   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 08:33 PM
@Fox24 They were just some random things, a possessed doll & a pile of cat clocks. You can never have enough randomness in life, unless your a rather serious fella. ;D

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# 3   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 08:24 PM
I liked this, but in the add on's, what were the last two closet finds? I got the where's waldo and angry monkey in the closet but the other two I missed.

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# 2   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 06:59 PM
I greatly enjoyed the cat clocks. And the adorable cameo <3

odd13
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# 1   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 04:47 PM
Surprise, Surprise

I hope you all will enjoy the show~

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Mar 1st, 2010
Votes Cast: 17
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