Red: keep up this sexy,sexy work plz. I am very much enjoying it and I like how the personality's play off of each other. the inks are getting really nice I'm loving the faces and your action and anatomy are steadily improving. Tones were lovely, and hands! yeah good job! Sweet last page I loved Rabbit's attitude there.

Willy D: Man, great improvement, this is looking good. even though you had more to it I guess, this worked as is. Your art is starting to catch up to your ideas. But practice more with your mech shit, it all reminds me of soldat armor. Get that new character in dude, I'm looking forward to more comics.

This was funny the first time and will never stop being funny....

Hm...I'm absolutely sure.... I'm going to win.

That wasn't very nice.

Hahaha Qyzex what the hell.

Anyway I had fun reading both of the comics

wow....

AAaaaagreed

And that is why your one of my most favorite people on here Red.

yes, sir I do.

Willy D - Page 2 Panel 1 I'm totally stealing...and there is nothing you can do about it...actually I just might steal the whole page...panel 2 is ace as well...

RR - Moa makes me want to punch her in the face...that's good writing. not much of a critique but do you enjoy writing just the most horrible bitchy cunty shit ever?  I love it...

I like the inks from both of you...although...I'm pretty biased I see BnW and I'll probably like it...

Red I recommend putting more facial expressions and maybe body language.

Moa looks to be consistent in character which is a good thing. And the understanding of her mindset is well put. some rough spot of drawing but hey you get a week, give you a break,right?

WillyD Tough dark approach but I fell off near the end. I see you didn't get to finish it, so that could very well be the reason.

Uploaded.  But it's not finished.   I put in what pages I managed to finish by today.  There are no words that can express the frustration I feel right now.

So what I'm gonna write now, I'm not writing looking for sympathy, fuck that, I just want to say sorry in case I cannot complete this comic in time.  Even since this SDT started I've been having issues.  I have to deal with legal issues for my household as well as the fact that my stepfather has become very ill and was rushed to the hospital yesterday.  Aside from my studies and work on top.  But by no means am I defaulting here, because if anything, drawing is my stress relief.  And even then, I will always come out on top, with the help of God and all my resources at hand, this will all be a bad memory someday.  But if I can't put forth my best, I'm sorry.  I'm also kinda sorry because I might be venting here a little.  But you can be sure that despite all of this shit going on I am working on my comic.

I'm betting on the girl ~ she's my favorite <3
Good luck everynun!

Rabbits are famous for their humping and thumping.
GOOO TEAM!

Bitch Brawl

I didn't think my revenge would come so soon...

Red can finally draw fanservice!

AAAWWW YEAH LESBIAN SCHOOLGIRL ACTION IS GO !

WILL, GRAB YOUR GIANT MECHA AND MEET ME IN SPAAAACE

KICK HER ASS WILL

THE STUDENT CHALLENGES THE MASTER

Destined battle!