Coil vs. Sam

Coil vs. Sam

by Monday


1223 points
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by sixtem


1226 points
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JoshuaEliGilley
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# 25   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 10:08 PM
Monday, as others have said it's good to see you do less pages-more quality. Overall it just looked really sick. While you lose some of the idiosyncrasy of your hand lettering it does improve readability and you meshed it well with your art here. The last attack needed one more panel I think of the projectile coming from coil's tit-guns toward Sam before the big blast. I don't get the overall story either I guess, but got enough out of the characters to take interest in their conflict. The characters and story overall came across very organic and natural.

Six: In contrast, your interactions were kinda stiff or awkward, the dialogue got too explain-y and introducy I think in spots. Overall story was cool, I liked how you made the S.D.T. event stuff for the opening. The guys in the beginning needed a bit more intro or refresher, to get readers more excited about the conflict. Colors and pallettes were lovely throughout, word balloons were rough but I liked your SFX.

Very entertaining I hope you guys tie as well :)

Monday
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# 24   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 08:24 PM
c'mooooon tiiiiiie

Angie
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# 23   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 06:38 PM
sixtem: 50/50? Now I'm hoping we'll tie.
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That'd be nice, then we'll be back to having an even number of people instead of odd and no one will have to sit out next round.

sixtem
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# 22   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 06:08 PM
50/50? Now I'm hoping we'll tie.

Promatim
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# 21   Posted: Mar 1 2010, 04:59 PM
It's nice to see Pio finally cutting back the pace and working on quality.

Much respect to Sam, but I think instead of doing 14 pages, you could slow down and focus on improving your art chops.

Monday
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# 20   Posted: Feb 28 2010, 06:28 PM
William_Duel: Hmm I didn't notice it at first, but did Coil have a Shinji moment and ejaculate all over his hand?  Or did he just jerk off on Sam's fried corpse?
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Yes

jesse
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# 19   Posted: Feb 28 2010, 02:48 PM
I know fucktons of girls who look like guys, and I for one am thankful for the diversity.

William_Duel
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# 18   Posted: Feb 28 2010, 02:34 PM
Hmm I didn't notice it at first, but did Coil have a Shinji moment and ejaculate all over his hand?  Or did he just jerk off on Sam's fried corpse?

Coatl
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# 17   Posted: Feb 27 2010, 10:53 AM
In ters of art, I have to give it to Monday.

In terms of story, Six did a great job.

amazingdavid
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# 16   Posted: Feb 24 2010, 06:50 PM
I'd say after reading all the comics up right now...this was by far my favorite battle...

luniara
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# 15   Posted: Feb 24 2010, 06:51 AM
Monday - always a fan. Your story was really original in my eyes and I found it entertaining with what your mind can come up with. You captured your opponents character and kept it simple and still managed to keep the same quality you normally throw out.

Six- I like the character, but I dunno- I think what urks me the most is that all your characters look like guys. Even if they were cross dressers, etc- they still have no feminine features aside from boobies. I wasn't as pulled into your story as I was Mondays, however- I loved the color tones you used.

Charlie
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# 14   Posted: Feb 23 2010, 06:48 PM
Really close battle for me, it was kind of tough to vote on this one!

jesse
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# 13   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 06:26 PM
I've been rooting for Coil to take all, but honestly, Sixtem's comic gave a much more interesting treatment of the character. Sorry, Pio, I gave it to Six.

Fox24
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# 12   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 05:52 PM
all I gotta say is BRABOMB!!!!!

amazingdavid
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# 11   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 02:36 PM
Monday- Awesomesauce...artwise you never fail me...Story wise...man if I could ever understand your stuff I bet it would be awesome...this kinda reminds me of Blame..the story that is..shit happens and it looks cool but it doesnt mean anything to anyone but the author...

Sixtem: This is the first battle of yours that I liked...great story..good color...good pacing...very very impressive..

galvo
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# 10   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 08:52 AM
monday -- you're coloring .. wow! and i see you've been taking a page out of sheldons book too! good boy!  the story was a bit .. wtf? prolly cause i dont know what the hell is going on in void anymore i imagine...

sixtem -- duuuude ACE man, very handy action work my friend, i really enjoyed yer story as well.


i gave it up to sixtem for the win.

Phill
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# 9   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 06:10 AM
Monday: One of your cleanest comics so far! I wish you could keep your comics as simple as this. Still kinda messy though, and the story is... well... I could never fully understand your stories and I've yet to figure out why. It could be because you're very vague on background and your characters while creative are very flat and dull in terms of personality. I give you points for quality, but story was average.


Sixtem: Not bad dude, I'm surprised you're keeping up this level of quality. I liked the story and what you're doing with your opponent's character, kinda wish her/his death wasn't getting shot to death, the two use bombs, why not blow themselves up? Anyway, story won me over in the end here.

Darius Corry
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# 8   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 03:29 AM
Kudos to Coils situational but well rounded approach.
Kudos to Sam left field creativity of her story that consisted of her opponent dying but not at in the typical "tourney" approach.

Monday
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# 7   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 01:44 AM
Sorry kids, photoshops took a dive on me and I had to upload salvage files. And like Sixtem said, I tried something good and amazingggg.

sixtem
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# 6   Posted: Feb 22 2010, 12:03 AM
Uploaded and all that. I pushed it to the limit. You could also say I walked along the razor's edge.

sixtem
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# 5   Posted: Feb 18 2010, 08:13 PM
I think he wants in your pants, Monday.

amazingdavid
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# 4   Posted: Feb 18 2010, 10:32 AM
Monday...remember when me and your inks had that hot sweet dark black sex last time...

well Daddy wants some more of that sexy inky goodness...

and Daddy don't like to be kept a'waitin'

DrasticFantastic
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# 3   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 07:43 PM
uh oh. UH HO. HERE WE GO.

JoshuaEliGilley
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# 2   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 04:08 PM
fucking sweeeeet! 2 of my fav.s from round 1 :)

sixtem
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# 1   Posted: Feb 15 2010, 02:21 PM
I look forward to killing you soon! Or trying to, at least.

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Mar 1st, 2010
Votes Cast: 53
Page Views: 1482
Winner: sixtem

 

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