Centipete vs. Agent Black

Centipete vs. Agent Black

by Hiemie


929 points
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by Monday


871 points
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Monday
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919 comments
# 26   Posted: Jul 24 2009, 11:10 AM
Thanks everyone  ! I think I have a good idea what I need to do next in order to balance story and art :D.

Heimie, sorry that my battle wasn't going the way of the samurai but if you want a second row with this I'll be more than ready to murder you again. You deserve this win- while  I still have kinks I needed to work out.

This is pretty much a new process and a new level of work for me, Im hoping I can pull it off with the same calibre of craziness without sacrificing much of the qualities from my previous approach. Thanks for reading all

Jetaime
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# 25   Posted: Jul 24 2009, 12:23 AM
good work, guys!

hiemie: that was fun read all the way through. great ending.

monday: i think jack pretty much said it all. i miss that sort of schizophrenic feeling the earlier black comics had.

DelBarrio
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# 24   Posted: Jul 22 2009, 11:02 PM
Hiemie: Fun story, fun art. Always enjoy your stuff and it was nice seeing something that wasn't totally vulgar or full of random. :) It was slightly on the dull side, but not really in a bad way. Felt more relaxed than the usual.

Monday: Super awesome style, really enjoyed the movement of the characters and how the pages flowed together. Thought the story was a little not well portrayed. I mean, it was there- but I had some trouble following throughout most of it.

Slight push towards Hiemie's cause it made a bit more sense, but both comics were enjoyable.

Anthonybaiz
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# 23   Posted: Jul 21 2009, 06:14 PM
Hiemie: I really like the Plot and cateches in your Battle. I like the persona you gave Monday, and the comical finish great job.


Monday: man i think you ROCKED the HOUSE with this. with the exception of the unfinished. But i love your style man. I can't tell you to clean up your work and how to narrate your dialog's without taking out any original elements that you incorporate in this. You have a unique feel with your writing, story and art. so keep it up homie. and remember my face. cause we WILL battle in the future ;)

Jack
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# 22   Posted: Jul 20 2009, 01:02 PM
Hiemie: I've got nothing for critiques, this was really great.

Monday: The art was the best I've seen from you in an eternity and was really just great. The storytelling and writing kind of fell flat though. The dialogue didn't sound very good and the significance of Lent is kind of lost, since it's a sort of unimportant and mostly ignored time of the year. Your best storytelling is over the top, go back to that. Not over the top in a dramatic sense, but just wildly impossible and detailed scenarios where you force yourself to give out all the significant details. (Sort of like Black being a teacher and that kid being demonically possessed in your Macabre battle ANCIENT I KNOW I KNOW but the first example that comes to mind)

Get your speed back and get to reminding us why Agent Black comics kick ass.

Monday
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# 21   Posted: Jul 19 2009, 12:16 AM
Pong; yeah this process is gonna take getting used to, especially with getting used to the mentality of "perfect pages" as well as the work involved with really working them in a schedule. Those points were pretty much underestimated, thanks.

Mister Kent
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# 20   Posted: Jul 18 2009, 09:10 PM
Hiemie - Really creative and enjoyable story - nice ending, too
Monday - I really like your character designs, and the end would've looked pretty sweet if finished

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# 19   Posted: Jul 18 2009, 06:11 PM
Monday, I'm so glad that you've started using pencils instead of just brush-inking everything straight off.  Your panels are so much cleaner and I wasn't bothered anywhere near as much as usual by the weird anatomy.

Hiemie, the parody of Monday's style on page 6 was hilarious.

King_Pong
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# 18   Posted: Jul 18 2009, 11:37 AM
Hiemie: great colors this time.  Simple story, funny jokes.  I feel like your panel layouts aren't as creative as they used to be, and would like to see a little more variety page to page, but it's not a big deal.

Monday: You dropped the ball man.  This isn't just incomplete, it's not cleaned up well and some of the pages are scanned pretty poorly.  I don't know what you have going on right now, but you should care more about your comics if you're going to make them.

Monday
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# 17   Posted: Jul 17 2009, 06:17 AM
Oh boy, 7 out of 16 pages inked with 17 hours left...

this is gonna be interesting

Hiemie
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511 comments
# 16   Posted: Jul 16 2009, 09:56 PM
Finished-o-matic

Monday
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919 comments
# 15   Posted: Jul 15 2009, 10:20 AM
Russia is the No. 1 Country to report Rape cases committed by women.

Of 50 percent of these cases, the victim didn't press charges.

cultmasterflex
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125 comments
# 14   Posted: Jul 14 2009, 07:00 PM
im excited for this one

Anthonybaiz
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138 comments
# 13   Posted: Jul 12 2009, 09:58 PM
This is gonna be SOOOOO awesome.

It's just another "Magic Monday" whoa--uew-whoa

Yosai
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74 comments
# 12   Posted: Jul 4 2009, 06:32 AM
yayness!

JoshuaEliGilley
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461 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 1 2009, 06:13 PM
Fuckin A dudes, nice!

Dahque
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# 10   Posted: Jun 28 2009, 03:26 AM
This can only end well.

Chimaeric
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247 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 23 2009, 05:10 PM
you won't quit this time monday? ;0;

Red
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# 8   Posted: Jun 20 2009, 08:39 PM
oh mah gawd

Aluísio C. Santos
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735 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 20 2009, 08:50 AM
Uh Oh

King_Pong
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601 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 20 2009, 05:50 AM
How are you going to have time to do this AND THE FUTURE BATTLE?

Qyzex
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# 5   Posted: Jun 20 2009, 02:01 AM
Cool. I like Centipete.

William_Duel
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# 4   Posted: Jun 19 2009, 10:37 PM
Who will prevail?!  WHO WILL PREVAIL?!

Jack
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225 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 19 2009, 10:37 PM
This.



YOU BETTER NOT DEFAULT ON OUR BATTLE YOU SWINE.

Hiemie
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511 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 19 2009, 10:20 PM
Science.

Monday
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919 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 19 2009, 10:18 PM
Man, two battles at once, how do you manage your time, sir ?

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jul 24th, 2009
Votes Cast: 40
Page Views: 2233
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