Sentai Tournament / The White Light vs. Baron Idiot

Sentai Tournament — The White Light vs. Baron Idiot

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jv7x
Artist

99 comments

# 18 Posted: Feb 20 2009, 02:23 PM

I liked the story of the last entry better too. This one was good but I think we learned more about the Baron last round. Art was on par with your usual work and the nuclear washout was pretty sweet. That's all I've got.

JV

Baratacom
Artist

36 comments

# 17 Posted: Feb 20 2009, 11:17 AM

Well, to be honest I laughed more at your other fight, dunno, didn't seem so funny for me this time around. Don't get me wrong, it was funny, just not THAT funny. Also, can't help but think of page 1 as unnecessary. Art-wise however, I really do like this one better, especially liked the "fading due to nuclear warhead explosion" effect from page 6.

Phill
Artist

895 comments

# 16 Posted: Feb 18 2009, 04:57 AM

Oh knome....

Anywho, Matt, you already know my story preferences so I won't dive into that to save us the trouble. The art here was OK, but I seriously think you need to practice using the point perspectives honestly because on page two it looked like Baron Idiot was just trapped in a single square room...

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y119/phillipc/hiemiehelp.jpg

Best thing to do is to print out some of Andrew Loomis' perspective tutorials cause that can explain better than my example here can, but I think you'll notice the slight difference however between panels.

Aside from that, this was an OK comic for me, sucks Knome couldn't finish.

voidstone333

31 comments

# 15 Posted: Feb 17 2009, 07:43 PM

hieme that is a great really enjoy it specially the rainbow kick haha

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist

462 comments

# 14 Posted: Feb 17 2009, 03:34 PM

Man I laughed my ass off at the rainbow kick! Your portrayal of the White Light was hilarious.
Art wise definitely as good as last round, and I think pg 6 was very cool and successful with the nuclear fade-out.
I feel like the last page would've worked better with your hand writing, digitally inverted to white instead of the white font.

You're able to serve up a solid helping of Hiemie humor once again, but you mixed it up enough to keep it interesting.
good show!

bicentennial man
Artist

55 comments

# 13 Posted: Feb 17 2009, 07:16 AM

damn heimie ....SHUT THE FUCK UP!.....i almost choked to death laughin

M.E. Charm
Artist

89 comments

# 12 Posted: Feb 17 2009, 03:24 AM

Oh Hiemie, that was awesome.

Delani
Artist

14 comments

# 11 Posted: Feb 16 2009, 11:17 PM

That first page is my favourite part. Just because. Also, wtf, why wasn't Dave your opponent again? Lame.

Angie
Council

1937 comments

# 10 Posted: Feb 16 2009, 08:09 PM

Hiemie-Artistically this was fairly close to your last entry which is good, although I think you lost a little detail but it didn't hurt you too much. Story wise I thought it was cool that you went with the events that took place in the recent Hein match, it gave your story just a little more depth.