Chrimnon vs. The Butcher

Chrimnon vs. The Butcher


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by Nakia


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Rtv!
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# 23   Posted: Sep 3 2008, 04:50 AM
Yooooo, Nakia!
Voted: 7 -8 - 10
Good stuffs man. A lil hard to read with them big ass images. Void has a guideline about being 800 pixels wide. I discovered 850 works nice in classic view.
The lines aren\'t as clean as your previous fight, but i did like some of the poses. You definatly jerked some extra points from me just for being the first to display the arts of Krav Maga. That fukking elbow blow blew my sockets. Nice mang!
I also like the fact that Butcher admitted he can\'t take Chrimnon on on his own.
Lovin\' the gadgets and his co-op with Ghost backing him up.

Time won\'t permit it now but i absolutly want to take you on after what you did to P. hahahaha
If not it\'s always an honor to fight by yer side when the White Jacket orgy is near.

Keep it up, yer doing great.

Caanan - The default means shit to. I stopped trippin about defaults aloooong time ago. You do what you have to do, i know how crowded yer life currently is.
P.S.
Stop pretending you didn\'t get my messages nigga. Or I\'ll send you an anthrax bomb. -__-

Caanan02
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# 22   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 10:04 PM
Well Nakia, you did an outstanding job man.  You repped Chrim very well as well as showing moves of yer own.  Was a solid read.  Yer art couples with a fluid story def made the fight worth while.  You get better and better with every fight man, especially when it comes to your story.  For me, Art is one half, but when the story works, it just bumps up it\'s appear.  I know yer art will only get better and better and I def look forward to the battle you will engage in in the months to come.  hat\'s off to you man.

be blessed

YaRoof
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# 21   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 05:41 PM
Nakia i really like yur stuff man.. the pages were easy to read in my opinion and yeah background work would really step yur game up but not everyone is as fast as others on those so i get having to rush at times. page sizes WERE annoying but im sure youll pay more attention to that next time. i like that you addressed crimnons wordy nature but didnt need to dwell on it.. and also dunno if it was intensional but i thought the \"K-nan\" thing was a nice shout out to yur artist opponent. in any case.. well done.. look forward to fighting you soon.

Nakia
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# 20   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 05:30 PM
Sorry about the page sizes guys, I didn\'t even realize they were so ginormous. That\'s my bad.

 Caanan, sorry you had other obligations and couldn\'t finish our fight. it\'s cool though. As soon as you get some free time hit me up and well do this.

Rocul
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# 19   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 05:20 PM
It was kind of difficult and rather tedious to read due to the image size... I hope you keep that in mind the future.

luniara
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# 18   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 12:38 PM
Is it bad that I had a hunch that Caanan was going to default? Next time I think you should give us a much earlier heads up.
You had tons of time to do so.

Nakia, This was not as strong Art-wise as your first submission. Story-wise you rocked it hardcore. We are seeing more and
more into The Butchers story-line and your foreshadowing for upcoming fights blends in very well. In your next fight I would like
to see less \"detective\" style speech blocks. Maybe go with Thought balloons. (mix it up?)

Overall.. just spend more time on your backgrounds and WATCH your image sizes!  Hope to see you go right into your next battle.

michaelharris
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# 17   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 12:11 PM
I really hate the whole detective style self monologue thing. THe art was pretty competent although the background could have used more effort.  It got a little confusing with the electric suit and all but other than that it was pretty clear.

NeoIcarus
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# 16   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 11:52 AM
Nakia: Bravo, good sir. I don\'t have much more to add to what Angie said. All of it rings true. For the typos I suggest typing out your script in word or whatnot and running spell check. Afterwards, copy, paste and format the text in whatever program you use. In one shot you have the the two staring each other down and the rain dissolving before it hits Chrimnon. I think this was a nice touch but you should\'ve added the rain falling and hitting the Butcher as a contrast. That may of made the scene a bit clearer. On page 8, when the Butcher jumps from the explosion, his left hand looks a little stumpy to me. I suggest having his thumb and pinky outstretched a bit more.

Great entry, very entertaining. Though I would like it if your next battle had more battling Danielle. That\'s just me though. I didn\'t take any points off for that.

Kon
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# 15   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 11:44 AM
Nakia> I couldn\'t read it till the end because the pages got ENORMOUS. Sorry for that, the beginning was awesome and I can only blame you for you page sizes and for not managing your time enough to get some good backgrounds.
But it\'s still great quality wise and we get to discover the butcher a bit more.
HE IS AWESOME.

Angie
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# 14   Posted: Sep 2 2008, 10:58 AM
Nakia-I think story wise this was more enjoyable than your first fight, it gave us a better glimpse of The Butcher\'s personality and it read fairly well. You do however need to stop rushing your stuff! Your figures look awesome but to see these nice figures against rushed sketchy backgrounds, it really kills your quality for me. I want to see backgrounds on par with your figures. You also need to be careful about making sure you get the pages resized prior to uploading since massive pages can really make it difficult to read your battle. You should also be careful about your text, make sure to always proof read so you can catch typos. If you\'re one of those people that waits until the end to letter the pages, then don\'t wait until the end from now on and do it as you finish each page. Artistically this wasn\'t as strong as your first fight but I felt the entertainment was a step up for you!

Caanan02
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# 13   Posted: Sep 1 2008, 10:34 PM
Hey Everyone.  Just giving you all a heads up.  I\'ll have to default this fight due to other pressing obligation, which seem to be piling up.  That being said, I know Nakia is gonna bring it, and I too can\'t wait to see what he does.  I know this sucks for you all, as it does for me.  I would have loved to draw this fight, and some day in the future hope to fight Nakia again, but right not, time just wont permit it.  So anyway, take it easy and be blessed.

BornLoser
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# 12   Posted: Aug 26 2008, 04:11 AM
This will definately turn out for a good fight :)

justarhymes
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# 11   Posted: Aug 21 2008, 10:38 AM
spit hot fiya

NeoIcarus
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# 10   Posted: Aug 7 2008, 10:21 PM
Why? Why must I wait so long!?

Smigs87
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# 9   Posted: Aug 5 2008, 07:14 AM
No matter who beats who in this battle, everyone wins. :)

Caanan02
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# 8   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 11:29 PM
This will be fun

Chia
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# 7   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 09:48 PM
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! 8D

luniara
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# 6   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 12:44 PM
You\'re mine after this, Nakia.

Rtv!
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# 5   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 05:39 AM
Nakia: I wanted to take some time off after the P2 fight, but Caanan owes me this fight. :) so wish me luck!
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Stay away from the cops this time nigga. I seen that Youtube shit, hahahahahahaha

Rtv!
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# 4   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 05:38 AM
Caanan you just jumped on my Bitchlist.

Gooooo NAKIA!!!!!

Monday
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# 3   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 01:02 AM
OHohohoh let\'s get WESTERN.

Angie
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# 2   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 12:41 AM
Oh snap! Good luck you guys! No defaults or I eat your children

Nakia
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# 1   Posted: Aug 4 2008, 12:39 AM
I wanted to take some time off after the P2 fight, but Caanan owes me this fight. :) so wish me luck!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Sep 8th, 2008
Votes Cast: 23
Page Views: 1301
Winner: Nakia

 

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