Radios Baron vs. Verse

Radios Baron vs. Verse

by orenkie


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joninx
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6 comments
# 17   Posted: Jul 19 2008, 08:39 AM
how many pages do you hav to hav

Rone Rivendale
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# 16   Posted: Jul 15 2008, 09:57 PM
I\'m very impressed with your side CSIII. You managed not only to do 20 pages but 20 FINISHED pages. That is quite a feat. And it\'s not dragged out either. I didn\'t notice the grammar errors although I did notice one spelling error that was probably done on accident (missing letter at end of word).

Orenkie, wtf.

(Pi)
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# 15   Posted: Jul 14 2008, 01:56 PM
Got a bit of a DBZ vibe from the fight scenes here and there, but not bad. Get someone to proof your text before you flatten it, and there\'s a few anatomy/figure problems in there as well.

All in all, nice fight, hope to see more from you.

Dimension
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# 14   Posted: Jul 14 2008, 09:06 AM
I agree with what saintpio said about the story, but other than that I have no real problems with your comic. This looks like a very good first fight to me.

nice job man :3

saintpio
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# 13   Posted: Jul 14 2008, 02:45 AM
I didn\'t notice much wrong with the text. Just I thought the start was a bit weird how they started fighting for no real reason. I don\'t think many people would admit to being new to a place and then follow some guy into an alley for a sparring match. Other than that I really liked it. Nice first comic.

Airlight
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# 12   Posted: Jul 14 2008, 12:00 AM
I don\'t think the grammar + spelling was so bad that I couldn\'t follow what was going on. It was legible and that\'s basically my standard, hahah.

Impressive work for a first fight dude, I liked how it was narrative that you could follow the character\'s stream of consciousness as well as get a good feel on the portrayal of your opponent. This was a pretty solid entry.

Angie
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# 11   Posted: Jul 13 2008, 04:51 PM
CSIII-This was really strong for a first fight and I\'m impressed you got 20 finished pages in, a lot of vets can\'t even do that. You did a really good job on the inks but it would have helped had you cleaned up your pages a little more, I noticed pencil lines on a few pages still. Your anatomy was pretty strong most of the time but occasionally you had some problems with the arms being too long or the body being too narrow for the head. But other than that, good job dude, look forward to your next fight

Nibbles
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# 10   Posted: Jul 12 2008, 04:23 PM
Okay, I posted my first comment before I read it, I realize now I probably shouldn\'t have done that, because now this needs to be said-- You really need to work on your grammar and spelling.  I may be being a total grammar nazi about this but I seriously could not finish reading your comic.  Work on that, okay?

Nibbles
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192 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 12 2008, 04:03 PM
Huh, he said he uploaded it... Where\'d it go?

Anyway, HOLY CRAP TWENTY PAGES!

dragon-dan
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# 8   Posted: Jul 12 2008, 12:26 PM
wow, wow, you make a book for your first battle.
And it\'s consistently good, wow.
Work on the grammar & spelling and I\'m giving you 10/10
welcome to void.

Angie
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1937 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 11 2008, 07:26 PM
Too many people wait until the last minute to do word bubbles :( always always always scan your work as you finish each page and letter it then.

Powerz
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107 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 22 2008, 07:35 PM
make this awesome renkie.

Craqued
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202 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 16 2008, 10:15 PM
tiiiight

JawsDrawings
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35 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 15 2008, 07:40 AM
ooooh nice

Dimension
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489 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 14 2008, 02:24 PM
good luck you guys~

Rtv!
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# 2   Posted: Jun 13 2008, 09:52 PM
CIII, interesting character. Reminds me of my own in many ways. I liked yer intro ALOT.
Show me what you got! I\'d love to fight you too some day.

OREN!
You lost the trophy match;
Radios Baron is property of Rtv!\'s gang now!
As the sexiest member and supreme omnipotent leader,I, Rtv03 hereby command you to kick some ass.

4:00am
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# 1   Posted: Jun 13 2008, 05:43 PM
Nice

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