Finnegan vs. Johnny Gord

Finnegan vs. Johnny Gord

by neens


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by HAVEN!


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rabbitrabbit
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# 32   Posted: Sep 10 2007, 08:36 PM
That was kind of cute, Haven, but it sure isn\'t much of a final hurrah for Gord.  Fence\'s was at least half a grade higher in all categories.  

Mokuu
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# 31   Posted: Sep 8 2007, 07:14 AM
Fence: Good job on the 10 page in 2 weeks but whatever you do, in your next battles, please refrain from using those cheap description quotes next to your drawings, its basically showing us you cant gather your audience\'s attention on specific elements in the frame without TELLING them what it is. Kinda like that walking scene in the beginning, you dont need to WRITE that he\'s walking, ILLUSTRATE it. You want to show its Jingle\'s room? Add some kind of personal trait to the door instead of just pointing out that its jingle\'s room, it will make things much more interesting and will give your comics a bit more attitude. But, you\'ll need to study a bit to learn these.

haven12: Cool Cameo, but the excuse page might have been your downfall. Dont just write that Finnegan had an accident, ILLUSTRATE IT, make us laugh with some comical illustration of his character entangled in a series of unfortunate accidents. That might have got you a victory right there.


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# 30   Posted: Sep 6 2007, 01:44 PM
Incidentally, only through death matches does one gain eligibility for SRT matches, right? I mean, if you don\'t already have a dead fighter, you might as well risk one and call it a consolation prize that you COULD be a in a rez tourney whereas the other guy is \"sadly\" still among the living. XD

Also, I thought both comics were meritorious in their hilarity. Kudos to both for an entertaining hour.

neens
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# 29   Posted: Sep 6 2007, 01:44 AM
yea I\'m sorry I couldn\'t get everything coloured, tight schedule and I moved to arizona and stuff. and also I know it\'s not my best work by any means, I was planning on it to be a more simple silly thing. thanks for the crits though guys, keep it coming :3

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# 28   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 09:11 PM
Fence: Regardless of any time limit, you did a damn good job fleshing this one out. The story elements were pretty strong, especially how you tied in Merk\'s death as a sub-plot. ( the last page made me feel a little sentimental. ) The sewer scene made me giggle, especially with Gord shadowing Finnegan.

Haven: I hate being harsh with critiques, but....this one felt like a cop out to me. If you\'re going to battle another person\'s character, you should stick with that as the main focus. Just explaining in words only about what happened to Finnegan and then switching to another character lacks finesse and loses the purpose of it being a finnegan vs gord match altogether.
M\'sorry dude but I just didn\'t feel it.

My overall votes go to Fence.

Qyzex
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# 27   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 03:37 PM
Hey, people. It\'s a NO DUH thing that if they had more time, it would be better. So shut up about that. It\'s common logic. They dealt with 2 weeks to challenge themselves, not produce the best looking thing they ever have. Sheesh

Fence: Good job. A lot of it early on lacks background, even though they\'re in a sew, and it\'s basically all grey anyways, you could have had some simple texture. That spectacular fall panel is really lacking in any background, and makes it look like he\'s floating. Good job on trying to color it all. Too bad you didn\'t get it all finished. You also fell into that \"bricks for a background\" no-no. I know you can put out better stuff than this, even in the 2 week constriction. But hey, at least you finished and put out something that\'s a decent read, right?

Haven: It really seemed to me like you didn\'t actually want to battle Finnegan, and would rather battle TL Bot. Eh, anyways. Your art was quite sloppy, I\'d say. I\'ve seen some of your sketches look better than some of those panels. Not a good thing to have happen for someone who apparently finds art a life-time commitment, and thinks that it can\'t be done recreationally. >:|
It really didn\'t have much content to it. I can\'t say much for it

HAVEN!
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# 26   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 12:24 PM
Sariel: nah, it wasnt that i wasnt concerned about winning. it was that i bit off a tad more then i could chew as far as the time to draw went. I\'d like to say i\'m really dissapointed in losing, but, really i\'m not. in fact my character dying isnt a bad thing in my opinion. it broadens my horizons and allows me to focus on other things.

i really didnt plan to be going on vacation in the middle of this shin\'dig, and thats probably why i couldnt draw ten pages.

KUDOS TO YOU FENCE, I TIP MY HAT TO YOU.

dragon-dan
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# 25   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 11:51 AM
haven12, if your story had been as long and detailed as fence\'s I\'d have taken hours to decide who to vote for.  You\'re tied for laffs IMO

Kuro
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# 24   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 10:51 AM
I think it was pretty good considering the tight deadline.
good luck to both of you

-J

squid
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# 23   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 08:39 AM
Haven\'s comic made me laugh, although I wish it had been longer. I read fence\'s comic first so switching to those 12 pages to 5 was kinna dissappointing. But it\'s cool, and the robut was cute. Beep?
I really like fence\'s style of artwork, although in that scene in the laundry room, I wish she hadn\'t had to explain what was going on. I mean the \"Finnegan is distracted and doesn\'t notice..\" stuff. I wish that the drawings had been let to speak for themselves. I\'m pretty sure I would have caught the jist of the situation without the text. And yeah the two uncolored pages were kinda jarring but I assume fence just ran out of time. Those are my only complaints.
High marks from me on both comics :3

Sariel
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# 22   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 06:24 AM
i agree with Wei; if it was possible for this battle to have the full time for working (4-5 weeks, isn\'t it?) the comics could have more meat on them for judgement. though, even in short times, a comic could still have merit ..

fence\'s comic did well, and though the drawing style seemed slappy overall, and the color wasn\'t consistent for all the pages, the story and gags were quite amusing. by contrast, haven\'s comic was very lacking. it almost seemed like haven wasn\'t concerned about winning, and wouldn\'t care that much if she/he lost. was that the case?

Kozispoon
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# 21   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 02:10 AM
Win this Fence!
I loved the story- and the tie in to Merks whereabouts and demise. The white pages kind of threw me and I would\'ve loved to have seen the laundry scene with Gord in color, but all in all it was a pretty good battle! Your paneling and comic size is really interesting to see-and I could\'nt get over finnegan looking around for Gord in the dark sewer- your expressions were great! =D

Haven your story was good as well, but it ended so abruptly I kept clicking, expecting a next page. TL Bots cameo was adorable though. XD

Wei Ingnan
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# 20   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 01:39 AM
I hate two week battles almost as much as I hate one week battles......there are both kinda stinky....I wish you had both had more time to put into these....I think they would have been much better

the framework is there...just not enough finish

neens
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# 19   Posted: Sep 5 2007, 12:00 AM
uploaded, with like a minute to spare waaugh @_@

HAVEN!
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# 18   Posted: Sep 4 2007, 02:15 PM
haha, i\'m uploaded.

characters come and go, and if i lose, i look forward to my next one!

if i win, then HA FENCE IN YOUR FACE ;)

IWIHASCOE
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# 17   Posted: Aug 28 2007, 12:38 AM
Getting the only char we had killed is pro!!!! Good luck you both!

sixtem
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# 16   Posted: Aug 25 2007, 01:37 PM
Jeez, did I start a trend of arbitrarily getting your character killed?

Good luck guys.

Kozispoon
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# 15   Posted: Aug 23 2007, 06:45 PM
Oh snap- Death matches springing up all over the place. I don\'t want to see anyone go, but damn is it hot to see the CARNAGE! >:3

Ahem, best of luck you two.

oh shada
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# 14   Posted: Aug 22 2007, 11:12 PM
hahaha I still get surprised when I see this

Red
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# 13   Posted: Aug 22 2007, 08:19 PM
Puzzle brought up the word \"death\" before I did.... I would say that it was a puzzle/red collab

...dont hate, rabbit... you know you love it!!

rabbitrabbit
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# 12   Posted: Aug 22 2007, 05:32 PM
Is THIS one your fault too, RedRevolver?  >:o  

Puzzlething
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# 11   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 11:14 PM
PEER PRESSURE CLAIMS ANOTHER LIFE! WHY OH WHY DIDN\'T WE WATCH MORE AFTERSCHOOL SPECIALS!?

Red
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# 10   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 08:18 PM
the chat spawns another death match! damn you peer pressure!! good luck!!

Bittermause
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# 9   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 05:42 PM
aaaaaaaaaahhhh damnit MAN! D:
This is something i\'d never expect! God, do your best you two ;___;




Aluísio C. Santos
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# 8   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 03:29 PM
OHSHIOHSHIOHSHIT

HAVEN!
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# 7   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 01:37 PM
BUH-RING IT FENCE

I AINT SCARED O\' YOU
lets make this a fun match

rabbitrabbit
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# 6   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 01:29 PM
OH GOD, WHY ALL THE MEANINGLESS DEATHSES LATELY??  ;_;

oh shada
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# 5   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 01:14 PM
WHAT! why :-(

Qyzex
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# 4   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 11:38 AM
oh, FINALLY. kill some Lizard, Fence

Kal aMari
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# 3   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 08:58 AM
Wait a minute...this isn\'t King of Monsters....

neens
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# 2   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 05:36 AM
WAAUGH FINALLY

Enef
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# 1   Posted: Aug 21 2007, 05:34 AM
TAKE HIM DOWN FENCE


Good Luck Haven.

Comic Details -

 
Type: Death Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Sep 11th, 2007
Votes Cast: 63
Page Views: 557
Winner: neens

 

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