TL Bot vs. Mimi The Mime

TL Bot vs. Mimi The Mime

by Red


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Red
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# 46   Posted: Jan 28 2014, 05:02 PM
I super loved this one but I am prettttttty sure that I don't have a single page anymore. Sadness!

Kozispoon
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# 45   Posted: Jan 27 2014, 07:36 AM
Sugha: Broken comic. >:
Would be cool to see TL Bot's side if you still have the images, Red. c:
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Oh wow, had no idea people went this far into the wayback machine to read! Thanks a bunch for giving this a look, Sugha. <3
I actually saved some of Red's pages, but for some reason am missing a couple. Hopefully we can bump heads and see about stitching them together because her side of the battle was great.

Dechado
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# 44   Posted: Dec 6 2013, 08:24 PM
Broken comic. >:

Would be cool to see TL Bot's side if you still have the images, Red. c:

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Holy shit Kozi. I loved this comic.


      Edited Dec 6 2013,  08:27 PM by Dechado

v
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# 43   Posted: Sep 9 2007, 09:28 PM
nice,badass even!

rabbitrabbit
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# 42   Posted: Jul 15 2007, 01:17 PM
Oh dear.  It\'s another one of those battles where I don\'t know who to vote for.  These are both just plain adorable!  ;_;  

Miss Revolver:  You brought on the funny.  The honorary-mime-mafia TL Bot and the Mimi-lamp especially had me in stitches.  XD  
You might want to try making actual BORDERS between your panels, though - as in, some whitespace, rather than just a thin line.  It\'ll make the comic flow better.  Also, don\'t think we didn\'t notice you avoiding drawing hands by making some panels that showed only the sign Mimi was holding up.  *finger waggle*  That sort of thing works in moderation, but you started using it to the point where it became a little unclear who was holding the sign.  

Miss Spoon:  Art and expressions are pure gold, like always.  You make the monochrome look like it was done on purpose, rather than just a substitute for color.  And on the part where TL Bot was holding the \"surrender\" flag -- OMG, that was just so WRONG.  <3  
Your paneling gets confusing in parts, though.  There are two things causing it.  
1. Word balloons and characters break out of the panel borders way too much.  It can be a neat effect used sparingly, but for the most part, the comic will read better if you keep everything within the panel borders.  On the page where TL Bot tackles Mimi, the image of the actual tackle overlaps the panel above it.  So in reading the page, the eye is led from the ice cream lick to the overlapping tacklesplosion and THEN to the Mimi noticing the oncoming bullet, which probably isn\'t the intended order.  
2. You need to take into account that the (English-speaking) reader will tend to read the panels from left to right, and THEN from top to bottom.  In your second-to-last page, the panels are in sequence if you read them top-to-bottom and then left-to-right, but the initial instinct is to go left-to-right FIRST.  That makes it kind of clumsy to read.  
Panel flow and layout is one of those things that you really can\'t find reference material for, either, because no two layouts will ever be the same.  That makes it even harder.  :/  Try looking at your thumbnails with a super-critical eye for that kind of thing, or getting a proofreader.  

Yikes, that was a bit more critical than I wanted to be.  Despite how I sound, I liked both battles very much, both characters just OOZE adorabletude, and you\'re BOTH on my effing hitlist.  >:3  

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# 41   Posted: Jul 11 2007, 09:16 AM
OMG!! I\'m at work right now reading this and am in tears!

I loved em both....I can\'t make a proper critique

Red
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# 40   Posted: Jul 10 2007, 09:35 AM
the mime mafia talks in Kozi\'s comics, so don\'t ask me!! haha, maybe they are rebel mimes and don\'t play be the rules? >: I

Weepy
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# 39   Posted: Jul 9 2007, 08:50 PM
I haven\'t been agreeing with the closeness in most of the close voting for most of the matches lately...
But I think it\'s justified this time.
Definitely a match I was waiting for.

Red, I don\'t know why, but it seems that your art is a lil\' off this time. The jokes have more of that charm that I like, so major points there.
But should that mime be able to speak?

Kozi, excellent art, but it took me a while to read the panels properly on page 5. Maybe it\'s just me?

Hard to vote on, hmm.

Sean Patrick Kelly
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# 38   Posted: Jul 9 2007, 07:30 PM
Both are fucking funny!

Aluísio C. Santos
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# 37   Posted: Jul 9 2007, 10:00 AM
I liked both of them a lot, very interesting stories!

I got a problem only in red\'s ending, which I found abrupt. Other than that It\'s cool.

I loved Kozispoonery textures in the drawings, it rocked. The plot as well

Good luck :D

Jessica*
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# 36   Posted: Jul 9 2007, 04:02 AM
Oh god they are both brilliant...*hugs Kozi and then Red*

Ryuartyi
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# 35   Posted: Jul 9 2007, 12:54 AM
Red, you did get your funny back. It\'s nice to see that TL Bot got a plot line. I thought the quality on humans was a lot better than your last fight, as well as everything else. Nice job.

Kozi, ... I didn\'t get the point of the comic. The second last page confused me, and it\'s taking several times to re-through it. I liked the quality though, but I enjoyed your last comic more.

CrimsonViper38
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# 34   Posted: Jul 8 2007, 09:19 PM
worth the wait, A\'s in entertainment for both!

Hitsuzen
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# 33   Posted: Jul 5 2007, 07:19 PM
Some weird thing happened, the battle was listed with the finished one...and I read both comics...but now its listed as not finished..? Pretty weird, but good artwork! lol

odd13
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# 32   Posted: Jul 5 2007, 07:06 PM
good luck to both of you, I look forward to seeing this battle. :D

Red
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# 31   Posted: Jul 5 2007, 04:01 PM
I\'m sorry, I dunno why my battles always have problems ;___;

D6016
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# 30   Posted: Jul 5 2007, 02:40 PM
umm, there seems to be a wee little problem, when i click on any of mimi\'s pages i get \"this fighter is not part of this battle\" which don\'t make much sense to me >.>
am i the only one getting this?

Wei Ingnan
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# 29   Posted: Jul 5 2007, 02:38 PM
somthing is definitely wierd......had to hand it over to Kevin

Jessica*
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# 28   Posted: Jul 3 2007, 06:56 AM
Nevermind...we\'ll still see the match!

Red
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# 27   Posted: Jul 2 2007, 04:23 PM
The problem was with me, I always have some sort of problem uploading my pages for some odd reason, and this time was no exception. A couple of the pages I sent in were not opening properly, so I think he just extended it to give me time to get it all straightened out. I emailed the pages to him, and they should work now... hopefully!!

Kozispoon
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# 26   Posted: Jul 2 2007, 04:11 PM
I -know- Redrevolver is done with her pages and I\'m done with mine 0_o Soooo, unless there\'s an invisible third person, I don\'t know who asked for an extension.


Ryuartyi
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# 25   Posted: Jul 2 2007, 03:17 PM
The fight got knocked back 8 days? Is it the upload problems or was an extension needed?

Wei Ingnan
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# 24   Posted: Jul 2 2007, 02:34 PM
hear hear and you\'ll have to wait another day or so...upload problems

Red
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# 23   Posted: Jul 2 2007, 10:31 AM
haha, why don\'t you wait till you see our pages to decide who you side with?

Razz
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# 22   Posted: Jul 1 2007, 11:46 PM
I love both these characters, but I gotta sway towards Kozi a little bit more. If I don\'t die from laughter, I will be awaiting both Kozi and Red\'s next battles with bated breath!

Not bad for my first post, either. :3

Jessica*
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# 21   Posted: Jun 27 2007, 01:07 PM
Hurrah for weird Al drawing/uploading inspiration!!

Red
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# 20   Posted: Jun 26 2007, 09:10 PM
I think I got my funny back, I promise a more entertaining comic than last time <33

Kozispoon
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# 19   Posted: Jun 26 2007, 02:29 PM
Working on Page four while listening to Weird Al\'s, \'She Never told me She was a Mime\'. I\'m in heaven <33

Jessica*
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# 18   Posted: Jun 26 2007, 02:01 PM
Oh yeah my favourite cartoon heroine! Go Mimi!

Pelz
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# 17   Posted: Jun 23 2007, 06:41 PM
X333 Goooooooo :D GOOD LUCK to both of you! I\'m so excited!

Red
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# 16   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 09:52 PM
ohhh Kozi, from the moment I saw Mimi I knew that you would have to kick my ass in a fight one day. <333

CrimsonViper38
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# 15   Posted: Jun 20 2007, 05:07 PM
haha of course. these two are made for eachother :-P

Weepy
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# 14   Posted: Jun 19 2007, 03:05 PM
NO WAY!

Hitsuzen
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# 13   Posted: Jun 19 2007, 02:36 PM
T-t-t-t-t-TL BOT!

Qyzex
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# 12   Posted: Jun 19 2007, 02:27 AM
I smell sex and candy here

justarhymes
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# 11   Posted: Jun 19 2007, 01:39 AM
I love it.

Kal aMari
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# 10   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 07:05 PM
MATCH OF THE MILLENNIUM.

...Or not.  Still gonna rock.

ThorHugs
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# 9   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 01:08 PM
This is gunna rock so hard. I\'ll be there. With popcorn.

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# 8   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 12:35 PM
Red i was getting worried about you, I glad you got a new battle best of luck to you. Kozispoon good luck to you as well your 1st battle was pretty funny.

This battle is going to be great!!!

fowlie
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# 7   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 09:23 AM
YES!!! It\'s about fucking TIME!!! GOD!! D:<

rabbitrabbit
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# 6   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 08:33 AM
I SECOND that hooray!  

Enef
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# 5   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 04:15 AM
FINALLLLLLY :D

Craqued
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# 4   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 12:51 AM
oh yea oh yea oh yea

Kozispoon
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# 3   Posted: Jun 18 2007, 12:42 AM
Round two baby- SILENT BUT DEADLY. D:

Red
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# 2   Posted: Jun 17 2007, 11:03 PM
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!

Hiemie
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# 1   Posted: Jun 17 2007, 09:58 PM
HOORAYS!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Jul 15th, 2007
Votes Cast: 67
Page Views: 1227
Winner: Kozispoon

 

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