Once again, Pelica, I fall out of my chair laughing. Your characters are just exploding with personality. Also, your art\'s improved a bit (has SOMEONE been using reference shots?? XD). You did justice to all characters involved without sacrificing any story.
Kaelin, your art, even without inks, is a cut far above the rest. But the storyline honestly didn\'t look like it would be going anywhere interesting even if it was finished. The cat guy was kinda funny, but nothing about your comic really GRIPPED me, and it had nothing to do with the unfinished art. I still scored you higher for \"Quality,\" tho.
Aesimi & Beethoven vs. Carolyne Reigne
Critiques & Comments
# 20
Posted:
Jun 26 2007, 08:52 PM
# 19
Posted:
Jun 26 2007, 03:39 PM
Just tossed in my votes. Another funny episode with your fighters Pelica- good show. I don\'t know Kaelin too well, but from the above comments she\'s apparently bad ass. The rumors are true- its just a shame this awesome wasn\'t finished.
I doff my hat to thee Pelica. Great story, great flow and all around entertaining comic.
I doff my hat to thee Pelica. Great story, great flow and all around entertaining comic.
# 18
Posted:
Jun 25 2007, 06:40 AM
GOD, KAELIN, you nearly made me have a heart attack with this amazing comic, god dammit, that perfectly controlled line quality, its so fucking deadly, perspective was so well handled, nearly made me spill tears out (only person who ever made it was Chamba.) Its penciled but still has somewhat of a finished quality to it hell even that first frame alone must have took so much time. Damn, that made my day.... Battle again whenever you have the time, you have my vote on this one. Even the character interpretations were amazing.
Pelica: Read your comic first and was very entertained by it, Beethoven and Aesimi\'s personalities are perfect for the comical contrast your set ups, adding a third character into the mix just makes every thing more enjoyable. As for the artwork, what program are you using to draw? Some of your lines could be cleaner/straight-er, your panels are mostly leaning to the side and your backgrounds are rarely developed nor show extended use of perspective (yeah the tough part...) anyway whenever you have time, play around with perspective. Till then, good job.
Pelica: Read your comic first and was very entertained by it, Beethoven and Aesimi\'s personalities are perfect for the comical contrast your set ups, adding a third character into the mix just makes every thing more enjoyable. As for the artwork, what program are you using to draw? Some of your lines could be cleaner/straight-er, your panels are mostly leaning to the side and your backgrounds are rarely developed nor show extended use of perspective (yeah the tough part...) anyway whenever you have time, play around with perspective. Till then, good job.
# 17
Posted:
Jun 25 2007, 01:07 AM
Oh mah gawd.
Those comics both where hilarious and beauifully drawn. Too bad you couldn\'t finish it up, Kaelin. It would have been amazing!
Whoa... It\'s gonna be close!
Those comics both where hilarious and beauifully drawn. Too bad you couldn\'t finish it up, Kaelin. It would have been amazing!
Whoa... It\'s gonna be close!
# 16
Posted:
Jun 24 2007, 07:30 AM
Awesome job you guys. Pelica that was hilarious, especially the first page. I laughed a lot. Kaelin, I wish you could\'ve finished yours, but I enjoyed reading it otherwise. Nice job both of you.
# 15
Posted:
Jun 23 2007, 10:48 PM
ah man kaelin, i wish you weren\'t going on hiatus. (sad panda)
# 14
Posted:
Jun 23 2007, 09:29 PM
Pelica, In the past while reading comics on void the number of times I\'ve literally laughed out loud at them could be counted at one hand. You on the other hand, had me laughing twice a page. (my family thinks I\'m crazy now, thank you)
Kaelin, your art is effing stupendous, and totally drool worthy. But, alas, you didn\'t finish.
Kaelin, your art is effing stupendous, and totally drool worthy. But, alas, you didn\'t finish.
# 13
Posted:
Jun 23 2007, 02:58 PM
Nicely done you two!
Kaelin - with pencils that clean, bumping the contrast could make it more legible - but ONLY if you don\'t have time for inks!, heh.
Pelica - I still love it that your character\'s home is inside a dimensional box!
Both good Stories, both easy to read,both made me chuckle.
see you \'round!
Kaelin - with pencils that clean, bumping the contrast could make it more legible - but ONLY if you don\'t have time for inks!, heh.
Pelica - I still love it that your character\'s home is inside a dimensional box!
Both good Stories, both easy to read,both made me chuckle.
see you \'round!
# 12
Posted:
Jun 23 2007, 10:32 AM
Awesome comics, the both of you!
I didn\'t expect to run into this comedy in this matchup
The angles you got were great, Kaelin.
I just bought my first Micron last week, and I unfortunately realized how quickly the ink seems to go
I share your pain!
I didn\'t expect to run into this comedy in this matchup
The angles you got were great, Kaelin.
I just bought my first Micron last week, and I unfortunately realized how quickly the ink seems to go
I share your pain!
# 11
Posted:
Jun 23 2007, 10:16 AM
Oh God.. XD Pelica, that was great. I hope you win, it would be well deserved. ::Will be rereading this on a regular basis, just for giggles::
# 10
Posted:
Jun 23 2007, 09:45 AM
Oh Pelica, Beethoven is so cute! I love how real the personality of your characters are, its very easy to read and watch them do things that seem completely natural.
And Kaelin, your penciling job is so beautiful! Its sad you couldn\'t finish though.
Good job guys : D
And Kaelin, your penciling job is so beautiful! Its sad you couldn\'t finish though.
Good job guys : D
# 9
Posted:
Jun 21 2007, 05:56 PM
Phew! I uploaded too x_x Not my best, but meh xD;
# 8
Posted:
Jun 20 2007, 05:49 PM
Uploaded!
I didn\'t get as much done as I hoped I would, but I was determined to submit so I made sure I had enough. XD Lookin\' forward to seeing your half Pelica!
I didn\'t get as much done as I hoped I would, but I was determined to submit so I made sure I had enough. XD Lookin\' forward to seeing your half Pelica!
# 7
Posted:
May 27 2007, 05:13 PM
Carolyne lives!
# 6
Posted:
May 25 2007, 09:42 AM
XD Just watch, after all this flattery I\'m gonna get my ass handed to me.
I\'m eager to see what you come up with Pelica. xD Your storytelling is hilarious. G\'luck!
I\'m eager to see what you come up with Pelica. xD Your storytelling is hilarious. G\'luck!
# 5
Posted:
May 25 2007, 05:38 AM
xD Kaelin\'s art is awesome, so you\'re probably right Rodent, but if I only entered battles I was sure I would win, where would the fun be in that? <3 (Besides, I really want to see what she does with Aesimi and Beethoven xD)
# 4
Posted:
May 24 2007, 02:52 PM
WooT! Really looking forward in this one!
Cardboard box mode!
Cardboard box mode!
# 3
Posted:
May 24 2007, 02:26 PM
Pelica, I hope your comic will be truly hardcore despite the high probability of its loss. Not to imply that you\'re bad. Just that Kaelin has an unnatural voodoo aura of total unbeatability.
Hope to see something entertaining from you both.
Hope to see something entertaining from you both.
# 2
Posted:
May 24 2007, 12:29 PM
WHAAAT THEEEE awesome
# 1
Posted:
May 24 2007, 10:55 AM
haha YEAHHHHUHH! GO PELICA GOO!! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jun 30th, 2007
Votes Cast:
61
Page Views:
2036
Winner:
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