Jacie Reznic vs. Ms.Moppit

Jacie Reznic vs. Ms.Moppit

by Madison


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by cyrine


1546 points
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mecid
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# 18   Posted: Sep 1 2006, 10:04 AM
Two entries with very different moods and art styles. Fun to read.

Quality was surprisingly hard for me to figure out. Cyrine\'s style fits the silliness of the comic and it\'s pretty amusing to see what faces Ms. Moppit makes. However, there\'s a lot of blank space. It works in some places and in others, makes it feel like you just didn\'t feel like coloring.
Madison did winning out in quality. I have to admit I\'m partial to the coloring style.There was also a more complete feeling to the panels. I am going to say that after looking at your panels again, they were somewhat boring. This may be a minor complaint because the story you were trying to tell was to build tension of some sort. And the fact that the story seemed so short (to me) it effected the art.

And that leads to Creativity, which I gave to cyrine. While both stories (plots...whatever) were different genres, cyrine\'s felt more complete. Madison\'s, while having the potential to be interesting, ends abruptly. I\'m not saying every entry has to be 8+ pages but I feel like it just ended without any prompting.

Entertainment-wise, cyrine won again because of general silliness and being complete. Plus, as I said before, I enjoy Ms. Moppit\'s expressions. Madison\'s almost had me but kinda left me wishing there was more to it.

Lize
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# 17   Posted: Aug 31 2006, 09:12 AM
I love madison\'s coloring style but cyrine\'s story is really really funny^^

ArtisticEnigma
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# 16   Posted: Aug 30 2006, 08:25 PM
I love the amazing painting style we got on our VCPD side...as far as the puppet side though I love the amount of emotional faces. The whole blonde brunette redhead thing kinda killed ya moppit...although I love the comedy. Jacie had great shades...I wish there had been at least one more page.

Dive
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# 15   Posted: Aug 29 2006, 11:53 AM
While I like the thriller feel in Jacie\'s side of the battle, it just seemed unfinished.  I felt Ms. Moppit side had a more complete story.  So while I give Madison a win in Quality, I must give Cyrine victory in both Creativity and Entertainment.

Toxic Toothpick
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# 14   Posted: Aug 28 2006, 12:46 PM
Just to let you know cyrine...your character has been added to my hitlist...mwahahaha, when I finally get the balls to ink and color my character onto there...your gonna be one I\'m gonna hit up!!!!! Oh and once more...I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE her face on page five, frame 3....D:>

cyrine
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30 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 28 2006, 08:34 AM
Thanks everyone XD I\'m glad you guys enjoyed the comic.

And your comments are always appreciated!

Toxic Toothpick
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132 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 27 2006, 08:47 PM
oh yah, and btw miss moppit\'s expressions are priceless, here mouth sort of reminds me of Rock Lee\'s from Naruto

Toxic Toothpick
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132 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 27 2006, 08:46 PM
\"meow meow\" \"bark, bark\" \"potato, potato\" \"french fry french fry\"<-------that last one is what I would have said...D:>>

oh shada
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103 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 26 2006, 03:20 AM
ahhaha, good show.

Bobbert
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# 9   Posted: Aug 25 2006, 11:40 PM
Hehehe, the ol\' blonde potato joke. Classic fun.

Larathen
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# 8   Posted: Aug 25 2006, 09:31 PM
Madison holy fuck that last page scared the hell out of me o__o;;

cyrine
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30 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 25 2006, 07:57 PM
Hmm I can see the light blonde and skin tones in my comic only when I look at the computer screen at a side angle, but not when I look at it directly O_O weird.




cyrine
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30 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 24 2006, 11:41 PM
Submittedness!

oh shada
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103 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 23 2006, 03:21 PM
hee hee hee hee!!!!

let\'s go let\'s go, get with the go flow!!!

cyrine
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30 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 22 2006, 02:08 PM
haha your comment just gave me great inspiration XD

omg T_T time is running low... eep!

oh shada
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103 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 18 2006, 02:32 AM
OOOOOH! tune in next week-----

QtRNevermore
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286 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 17 2006, 11:10 PM
bwahahaa... blonde vs blonde?  er..sorta
eeeeeek a spider! shoot it!

justarhymes
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635 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 17 2006, 08:30 PM
yasy~

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Sep 1st, 2006
Votes Cast: 61
Page Views: 592
Winner: cyrine

 

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