Speed Death Tournament 2006: Round 2 / Aya vs. Guy McManning
Critiques & Comments
# 13
Posted:
Jul 7 2006, 06:28 PM
thanks everybody, i\'ll be sure to put your crits to good use.
# 12
Posted:
Jul 5 2006, 11:17 AM
Democracy always wins!
Good battle on both sides, however Solly\'s battle was slightly confusing for me. . or something.
Also werfish, those first pages were scary. . I don\'t find the democrat that cuddly anymore
Good battle on both sides, however Solly\'s battle was slightly confusing for me. . or something.
Also werfish, those first pages were scary. . I don\'t find the democrat that cuddly anymore
# 11
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 08:21 PM
Democracy, all the way.
# 10
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 07:59 PM
Solly: I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this, given the time constraints. However, I have to agree with everyone else and say that your action sequences didn\'t really...well, contain any semblance of action. In terms of artistic quality, you were spot on, you just didn\'t quite hit the mark with your storytelling.
Piraticalfish: Guy = Champion. Democracy and Apple pie must prevail. A solid artistic entry on your part and a funny story to boot. I think what I love most about your style are the facial expressions. Your lettering was a bit tough to read in some places, but otherwise, my votes go to the spaceman.
Piraticalfish: Guy = Champion. Democracy and Apple pie must prevail. A solid artistic entry on your part and a funny story to boot. I think what I love most about your style are the facial expressions. Your lettering was a bit tough to read in some places, but otherwise, my votes go to the spaceman.
# 9
Posted:
Jul 3 2006, 10:29 PM
Solly:
I agree with Charmy. Everything is exactly like Blame: The pacing, the art, and the horrible habit of utterly no sense of movement in high-movement scenes. It\'s also kind of annoying when you don\'t know what\'s going on, not in the \"Holy shit-- chaos!\" way, but in the \"You didn\'t explain shit\" way. It was good, but kind of bland. Although, I burst out laughing at the \"Letz get a cup of wata!!!!\" panel.
Fishbot:
Much more entertaining, but I got a bit confused at page six as to what was happening. And page eight was a bit abrupt and sudden. Other than that: The gray tones and reds go great with your style.
I agree with Charmy. Everything is exactly like Blame: The pacing, the art, and the horrible habit of utterly no sense of movement in high-movement scenes. It\'s also kind of annoying when you don\'t know what\'s going on, not in the \"Holy shit-- chaos!\" way, but in the \"You didn\'t explain shit\" way. It was good, but kind of bland. Although, I burst out laughing at the \"Letz get a cup of wata!!!!\" panel.
Fishbot:
Much more entertaining, but I got a bit confused at page six as to what was happening. And page eight was a bit abrupt and sudden. Other than that: The gray tones and reds go great with your style.
# 8
Posted:
Jul 3 2006, 09:19 PM
Solly, being inspired by a manga is one thing, but it looks like you tried to completely copy Blame. D:
# 7
Posted:
Jul 3 2006, 12:06 AM
my pages arent as finished as i would like them to be TT__TT. oh well. i worked hard on these, i hope you guys enjoy them.
cant wait to see your pages solly! good luck.
cant wait to see your pages solly! good luck.
# 6
Posted:
Jul 2 2006, 11:04 PM
Let\'s rock.
# 5
Posted:
Jul 2 2006, 03:51 PM
haha, A vote for Guy is a vote against Communism.
# 4
Posted:
Jun 27 2006, 10:28 AM
im rootin for ya fish lessee another KICKARSE match!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 26 2006, 09:05 AM
I cheer for guy, I cheer for democracy
o-o
o-o
# 2
Posted:
Jun 26 2006, 01:58 AM
good luck solly! this is promising!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 26 2006, 01:07 AM
Noooo... but I like both of you guys....
Oh well, MAY THE BEST HUMAN WIN.
Oh well, MAY THE BEST HUMAN WIN.
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jul 9th, 2006
Votes Cast:
52
Page Views:
1745
Winner:
fishbot
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Fish, really cool fight, not as cool as your first one, but still really cool. It ended sort of strangly and a little unclear, but I got the just of it.
Good job you too, I gave this one to Fish