Fel, im quite disapointted with this actually. You had so much buildup for a mediocre ending. and man there was WAAY too much text in bubbles at times. That exotic dancing bit was a bit of a curve ball to me, but it gives me an idea...
Fanta, I\'m a bit swayed by the portrayal of P2 in this one. I\'v always pictured him to be this overall powerhouse of self-confidence, but here he just acts kinda like an ordinary nice guy. Not that it didnt help your story or anything, because that\'s the shining point here. The action part, although very little was still kind of bland...just not enough happened.
Mrs Robinson vs. P2
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# 16 Posted: May 6 2006, 02:06 PM
# 15 Posted: May 5 2006, 11:43 PM
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# 14 Posted: May 4 2006, 12:36 AM
Sorry Hiemz! If anything they\'re really Paddy\'s words being fed back to him. Racism is a theme throughout the story.
# 13 Posted: May 3 2006, 08:03 PM
Hay... Centipete wouldn\'t use racist words like that....
But I do enjoy seeing the word \"Snouts\" on the rise.
But I do enjoy seeing the word \"Snouts\" on the rise.
# 12 Posted: May 2 2006, 10:23 AM
I LOVE HAPPY FETUS\'!!!!
# 11 Posted: May 2 2006, 10:00 AM
14 hours left and i still have 2 more pages left to ink! INK!!!
No colors here. Thats what i get for attempting 10 pages.
Nevertheless i am filled with joy & excitement. And fetuses.
No colors here. Thats what i get for attempting 10 pages.
Nevertheless i am filled with joy & excitement. And fetuses.
# 10 Posted: May 1 2006, 04:51 PM
Sweet mother of potato salad! Great stinking bananas! Pink flying mole mutants! Harry pickled weasles!..............ok, now that im out of those things lets get on with the fight!
# 9 Posted: Apr 25 2006, 09:42 AM
Fanta purchased an extension.l...I forgot to mention it earlier...one week
# 8 Posted: Apr 25 2006, 08:01 AM
15 hours to go...scary no?
# 7 Posted: Apr 22 2006, 11:52 AM
How u goin wit ur pages Fel?? I\'m cleanin up my pencils, preping them for inking. Had the script done ages ago. Still got WAY heaps to do though.
I cant believe ur buddies with Jeff Cruz (Chamba)! He lives like 5mins away from me! Small world.
I cant believe ur buddies with Jeff Cruz (Chamba)! He lives like 5mins away from me! Small world.
# 6 Posted: Apr 7 2006, 10:43 AM
Make lotsa \'splodings!
# 5 Posted: Apr 5 2006, 10:59 AM
Where did this come from? Fanta is back!
Good luck on your battles guys. Looking forward to it.
Good luck on your battles guys. Looking forward to it.
# 4 Posted: Apr 4 2006, 08:16 PM
awesomeness incarnate. The return of Fanta can only bring good things.
# 3 Posted: Apr 4 2006, 11:01 AM
I hope to see booty here.
# 2 Posted: Apr 4 2006, 01:41 AM
I touch invisible lesbians!
FRANK MILLER WILL DIE!
FRANK MILLER WILL DIE!
# 1 Posted: Apr 4 2006, 01:30 AM
I\'ve been out of the Void circuit for awhile. Recently been itchin to get back in. Thanks fer acceptin Fel.
Jerry Bruckheimer aint got shit on us...
Jerry Bruckheimer aint got shit on us...
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