Road to Valhalla / Lena Viltdottir

Road to Valhalla — Lena Viltdottir

by Hellis


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Hellis
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# 11   Posted: Jan 9 2019, 11:50 PM
Golden: I did give myself a deadline, to not have all time in the world. But your point still stands, I did post it a week earlier so I had plenty of time for better TLC in the end. I did give it several once over and passes for trying to fix artifacts like the white holes. I guess my eye/mindset for such things need a lot more work, going back at it after posting I can see a lot more then I found my first few go through.  I'll tighten things up in my next comic

Corn, Heathen: I have downloaded so many bone and skull reference after this comic, don't you worry. I found I was terrible at them and just inner anatomy in general.

Fred v2.0.1 oh deffo got more on the horizon. One day, the answer shall be given.


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# 10   Posted: Jan 9 2019, 10:59 AM
So why do you persist? If you start with a question, I'd like it answered! :0
I ain't never gonna say no to good ol' creepy giant and/or the slaying thereof. I hope there's more of this in the future, it could be quite fun.

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# 9   Posted: Jan 4 2019, 08:06 AM
Corn is right, reference those skulls, they’re gonna be a recurring motif in this series, and it’ll make you better at drawing people with their meat on, to boot.

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# 8   Posted: Jan 4 2019, 02:49 AM
I really love how you are building this character, I think my only critique Id have for this character is I think you could use a lot more skull references they felt a little flat compared to a lot of the stuff in the comic but that takes practice and I am sure if you use this character more you will definitely get better at them!

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# 7   Posted: Jan 3 2019, 12:39 AM
Not bad but for a BB, it could have used a bit more TLC, since you have as much time as you want on it. There is multiple little white holes in the coloring, and some of the handwritten text can use some more work [like the "SMASH" on page 7 for example], though I will commend you on getting this comic done for the most part.

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# 6   Posted: Jan 2 2019, 09:10 PM
That amount of content you produce is amazing and I love viking girl, though it seems shes more mongol girl now? either way I like her and I like this comic and don't have much else to say other than I look forward to seeing more of your stuff and know you will keep doing more and getting better as you do.

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# 5   Posted: Jan 1 2019, 01:04 PM
This turned out great, dude! As much as you draw, you are and will continue to improve your technical chops. Your knack for comics storytelling and work ethic will see to that. Your strength lies in getting ideas on the page.

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# 4   Posted: Jan 1 2019, 12:24 PM
Awesome comic, Hellis!  I've been excited ever since you started leaking progress!  I love the moody darks, the dramatic style shifts. Well done!

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# 3   Posted: Jan 1 2019, 12:10 PM
Started this one about two weeks prior, gave myself a two weeks deadline to force myself to commit. Got it done quicker then I anticipated. So about 3 weeks of work on it.

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# 2   Posted: Dec 26 2018, 02:46 AM
 boy oh boy I'm super curious to see what you'll present us Hellis!!

Hellis
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# 1   Posted: Dec 25 2018, 11:41 PM
This ones been in the making for a while, giving myself a deadline so I will actually finish it.

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