Soul Hunting / The Carnival Master vs. Judgement Call

Soul Hunting — The Carnival Master vs. Judgement Call

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Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 17 2017, 09:52 PM
MRPR1993- I kept hanging on, hoping that the skele-gal was going to be explained, and there were pages it felt like we were coming close, but no cigar. That said, this one had me going "Wait, whose thins? Where's he off to? Why?
Still the effects you tried and colored pages were uniform and conssitant. I especially dig the intense glowy red  effects on page 2.

KARMA- JC and the Carnival Master seem like such a 'of course!' match up. Both kinda spooky, both soul collectors- its a match made in hell! :D
I can never get enough of your comics, Karma. You seem to have really found your stride with Judgement Call, and while your coloring time got away from you, I think you more than made up for it in some crisp clean inks. I really think your next goal in future battles would be to find a expedient means of coloring to really add that extra oomph to your battle. though honestly, I'm not really opposed to your straight ink work. Filling in all that white space with some fill blacks and clever techniques may also be an interesting route to go

KarmaLarma
Artist
61 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 13 2017, 05:41 PM
@Fukuro
Aw geez, I didn't notice. I went about resizing all of the pages at the same time, but I must have missed that one while saving and just saved it full size after lettering. That's embarrassing, I'll make sure it doesn't happen again.
@Pita
Yeeeeah, that first page is actually why the rest aren't in full color. I spent /way/ too much time tooling around with it to try and get it as I imagined. But yes, we'll see how demon and reapers making deals can unbalance the afterlife hehe.
@Cornbread
I get what you mean, but I thought with Carnival Master being a demon, it'd be a good opportunity to show JC is still a rookie at this when it comes to dealing with more dangerous things. He does seem to be getting beat a lot lately though, so I'll have to give him a chance to win more in the future.
@PR
I'm glad you liked it! Your characters were really fun to play with, and I'm happy about how you used JC in yours too. Good battle~ :>

MrPr1993
Artist
91 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 13 2017, 11:16 AM
Pitafish: I forgot to mention earlier, but is Grita planning to hunt down Zoey???  Oh no!  What's a little chook to do? o v o
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Find her soul, of course. She's got to be around somewhere... unless the lil' brave chicken fights back that is.

Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
Approval Committee
285 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 13 2017, 11:12 AM
MrPr1993: Pita - AH CRAP. Whoa. O_O; How did I miss that. I really gotta double-check more of these stuff next time. Thanks for pointing that out!
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No prob, Bob.
I forgot to mention earlier, but is Grita planning to hunt down Zoey???  Oh no!  What's a little chook to do? o v o

MrPr1993
Artist
91 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 13 2017, 10:11 AM
Pita - AH CRAP. Whoa. O_O; How did I miss that. I really gotta double-check more of these stuff next time. Thanks for pointing that out!

Corn - Huh. I really shoulda' done that. Well'p. Guess it's too late for that. But thanks for the suggestion! ^^

Karma: Ohohoh, love your depiction of the two! Also loved that CM had more screen time there compared to my entry!

Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
Approval Committee
285 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 13 2017, 09:18 AM
MRPR- Congrats on finishing the entry in full color!  Though there seems to be some overlooked things in your entry--pg 2, panel 4: It looks like "To be cancelled!" is being said by the Carnival Master, but the speech bubble's missing his custom treatment (black w/ red accents).  This makes the dialog a little confusing and almost led me to believe Judgement Call was saying this.
-pg 4, panel 5, wide panel shot: The exchange feels disconnected with how the speech bubbles are arranged.  They're just far enough from each other that I read the panel's dialog from top to bottom, not left-to-right as probably expected.  This can either be fixed with a rearranging of speech bubbles or the composition itself.  Play with it a bit.

KARMA: I'm really digging the shading in the first page.  It's a shame this wasn't throughout the comic, with only two pages in full color.
Though I do wonder if Grita's deal with Carnival Master will bring about consequences for the Underworld.  Maybe we'll see in a later story?

Corn Of The Breads
Artist
154 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 13 2017, 07:06 AM
I really looked forward to this comic Mr Pr great job on finishing every page. Though I'd recommend setting up an establishing shot, they are not always required, but it really helps the world feel more lived in and alive and gives a good frame of refrence for the action.

Karma the comic came out looking amazing, and the world is fun and lively even for being dead, Id like to imaguine this is the same carnaval that he fought click in and JC just has really long days on the job.

I think both comics came out amazing personally Id have loved to see Judgement Call be a bit more proactive in the battle or being more competent at his job I felt soo much could have been done with this match up letting Judgement call reap the soul of a character who is legitimately dying on void, so I guess it is intresting both comics went the same direction with the plot for me. You both did an amazing job and congrats on finishing some epic comics.

MrPr1993
Artist
91 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 12 2017, 11:50 PM
Phew, it's done! It's not much - but I finally had it done~

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 30 2017, 09:14 PM
omg do want

JCee
Artist
425 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 29 2017, 10:05 PM
SUPER interested in seeing this one = )

Good luck to you both!

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