Alright, I got lots of actual deleted scenes as in whole panels and pages I didn't use. While this wasn't the entire point of the jam, since no one else has done it enjoy! Some of these have appeared in my author's notes, but here's the up close better scanned versions. You'll see that I often not only do entire pages before scrapping them, but I change shit a lot. I'd like to eventually do this jam proper as there was a few scenes I didn't do for the Robin BB. These are the originals and not things I redid so yeah, crappy scans.
Angela Rudell vs Scarlett Prologue:Random pages and panels, I can't show you most of the final versions I used as that battle is currently broken and not on my DA.
final version of the above here
http://angieness.deviantart.com/art/Angela-vs-Scarlett-Prologue-12-75714515Why they were cut/changed:readability issues or I came up with more interesting angles. Especially where Angie uses her blood abilities to infiltrate the police officer's body and make him explode pretty much. Which could have been cool but the viewer probably wouldn't have gotten it.
Angela Rudell vs Scarlett
final version here
http://angieness.deviantart.com/art/Angela-vs-Scarlett-Page-7-80363971Why it was changed:I really liked those top two panels, especially berserk ass Angie but it didn't fit the format and I realized oh fuck she was running from the other direction and had to flip that scar panel.
Angela Rudell in Moving Foward
final version
http://entervoid.com/view.php?id=2056&side=1&iid=9 here
Why it was changed:well for one it was kind of dumb that there was just a random dark room with like 100 people standing in it for no reason. And for another, I wanted Angie to directly interact with the leader of the Masked Men. In this scene she just merely walks up and explains that she's coming back and you don't get that she's talking to the leader.
Angela Rudell vs Fedra
final version
http://entervoid.com/view.php?id=2494&side=1&iid=01 here
Why it was changed:Not really a scene, this was the original cover. There was going to be lots of dramatic heavy blacks with like patterns and designs inside the blacks or something, think Serial Experiments Lain. I'd dropped it because I came up with something more fun as I sat in class and doodled the new cover.
And for dealing with the vague and poorly scanned crap, here's a little bonus
from my Beyond Battle I'm working on! The above is the final lines (haven't colored anything yet), below was the original. I zoomed in to put more impact on Angie's expressions, which I enjoyed the fuck out of doing.
Intro Story
King
@ 12:38 PM Mar 29th