Paladin this is the only. ONLY B/W comic i have ever given A to i promis myself i wouldn\'t but it was just to good

Great pages Paladin! Your action, pacing and backgrounds rock.

Sorry Lotus, I make no promises about sticking to B/W (though, it is my preference). I want to improve my color and the only way to improve is by doing. That\'s what Void is all about.

Chao,
Right on, man. Never apologize for your art. I\'m bummed that I didn\'t get to see more of your stuff, but I understand. The real world takes precedent.

Stupid reality, always ruining my fun.

good work paladin. not a huge fan of your character but your design and action panels are fantastic. you should also stick to black and white, its your friend.

Fuck ME that was impressive Paladin.  You intimidate the bejeezuz outta me, your lines are so clean, and it a looks like you did it with just your computer!!  Awesome job, I can\'t wait to see more from you.

Amazing stuff Paladin. I\'m on the fence on the fire. Idk what to say about it.

Paladin - this entry absolutly reeks of effort. Great show, way to put your best foot forward.

Chao man...I honestly can\'t say I was disappointed because I wasn\'t expecting you to put up anything at all. Why you even bother to slap your signature on this wreck of an entry still remains a mystery to me.

Paladin, enjoyed the entire story. Top notch stuff.
Chao-too bad it wasn\'t finished.

Loved your first showing Paladin, it was an enjoyable read and the quality of it was very high, the backgrounds and inking were immense.
Look forward to seeing more stuff by you.  

Paladin: Amazing stuff, cant wait for your next battle.

Carlo: anything I could say you know already. Your art is quite good, but talent is only a part of the process.

Yeah, the fire effect was a calculated risk. In some places it works and in other places it just looks flat. It\'s got potential, but it could definitely use perfecting. I\'m glad the story and dialog are getting good reviews, though. You work with a script for a while, you start to woner if it\'s as good as you thought it was when you wrote it.

I dunno, I loved that fire effect you had going. Very surreal in grayscale. Your art is damn good, and I loved the script. I can\'t wait to see what you pull off next.

Paladin- Wonderful comic overall. Artwise, my only major complaint (and it\'s more of a preference thing) is that I wasn\'t too keen on the fire effect. Considering how clean the rest of the work is, the fire was a bit bleh for me. Also, on the second page, a frontal veiw on Carlo looks kinda wonky. But beyond nitpicking, I think everything is rather nice.  
Storywise, straight forward confrontation but I was amused. I thought the dialog went along pretty well, but then again, that\'s not my specialty.

Chao- Well, it looks like you had something going on. I can\'t say much beyond that.

dialog hard

woot ! go paladin!

OHMYGODTHISWILLBESOMEMESSEDUPCRAP!

Sweet Delicious Jesus! I totally went overboard with this. I need an editor.

hyuhuhuh Ay lewking fuhwurd ta dis >:ED

Now, now...  It\'s not over till the fat lady bites it.

Congrats on your first win Paladin.

CARLO BETTER NOT DEFAULT!