In a weird way it almost seems like these comics arre continuous, with Lily getting grounded at the end of Nothin's comic, and picking up in Neens' comic.  I really enjoyed both comics!

Neens: Love the style you went with here, the expressiveness of your characters is so good.  The tones worked out really nicely too, everything was crystal clear.  Lily's escape was especially great, the first panel on that last page is sop fun to look at.

Nothin: I really like how well you pushed this with such a simple style, it's definitely lacking in backgrounds but I didn't miss them a ton.  It was fun and dramatic and I'd love to see what's next for Steph!

Neens: Great cartooning in this. Lilly's expressions are so filled with anger and frustration, it's perfect. It's a simple story and it works well. The designer in me loves how you were able to stick to a consistent grid for your layouts. I'm trying to find something to criticize, but honestly this is a fun little short comic. Maybe the comedy could have been a little more exaggerated?

Nothin: I know you can only get so much detail in on a 1 week battle, but I do wish there were more backgrounds. I think this comic could benefit from different types of shots used on the panels. Most of the shots here are Medium, without enough movement of the camera or use of dynamic shots. The style is more cartoony, so I understand that super dynamic comic book shots don't always work as well for that kind of thing.

Ohhhh mannnn. I liked these a lot. Good stuff, you two!

I really like how both of you came to the same conclusion that lily is just grounded instead of being dead Both are super cute!

I hope you both win!