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THE INCUBATOR / Beeks' Incubator
« on: Feb 06, 2018, 03:00 PM »
Heya!
I'm new to EnterVOID. I try to sleuth out all the rules of the forums etc, but if I mess up, just slap my hands.
First sheet draft:
Things I wanna add to sheet:
Bio:
Mallory is the daughter of an eccentric hitman dealing in explosives (not particularly subtle for being a hitman), known to the reader only as "Mom". However, Mallory's a big girl now, and so she's been assigned to "run some errands" for Mom. She's got a list of names, and she even get to borrow Mom's purse!
Personality:
Unafraid but somewhat scatterminded (not more than your usual kid). Generally quite innocent, but doesn't really grasp the morality of murder. Think "Yotsuba" in a bizarre scenario, rather than "Tiny Tina", for example.
Fighting Style:
Indirect. Tries to choose the battlefield beforehand and lay traps. Tries her damndest to stay hidden but she might not be as stealthy as she thinks.
Intro comic, current draft:
https://imgur.com/a/4q4iU
Critiques are most welcome!
I'm new to EnterVOID. I try to sleuth out all the rules of the forums etc, but if I mess up, just slap my hands.
First sheet draft:
Things I wanna add to sheet:
- Close-up of gloves
- Example explosive devices
Bio:
Mallory is the daughter of an eccentric hitman dealing in explosives (not particularly subtle for being a hitman), known to the reader only as "Mom". However, Mallory's a big girl now, and so she's been assigned to "run some errands" for Mom. She's got a list of names, and she even get to borrow Mom's purse!
Personality:
Unafraid but somewhat scatterminded (not more than your usual kid). Generally quite innocent, but doesn't really grasp the morality of murder. Think "Yotsuba" in a bizarre scenario, rather than "Tiny Tina", for example.
Fighting Style:
Indirect. Tries to choose the battlefield beforehand and lay traps. Tries her damndest to stay hidden but she might not be as stealthy as she thinks.
Intro comic, current draft:
https://imgur.com/a/4q4iU
Critiques are most welcome!