House of Fragments Part 2: Full Version / Miller
Critiques & Comments
# 5
Posted:
Nov 26 2017, 05:08 PM
Everything here was an aprovement. The colors are more atmospheric, the dialogue more complete, the scenes easier to follow as a result.
# 4
Posted:
Nov 19 2017, 11:04 AM
Yes, good, this is a much better comic. I like the changes you made to the colours so the foreground isnt so far removed from the background, and the additional dialogue helps the clarity a ton. I like how we learned more about who your Miller used to be. He sure gets a lot of forms lol. (I know im in the minority but i still prefer the spider to the lizard form. Fight me, Skulls.) Thanks for cameoing Valley. Great comic!
# 3
Posted:
Nov 19 2017, 10:47 AM
The added dialogue, and the added depth to the characters you've put into this comic, really make all the difference. I actually enjoyed this comic a lot more now, and you definitely did a good job here. It's a shame you couldn't have done it as much as you would've liked before, but it's really impressive and admirable that you'd go back and work on it harder.
Also that little blurb under Miller's Furry at the end was amazing. XD There's so many Millers, one of these days I'm gonna have to read up on this Miller stuff!
Anyway congrats on getting this more completed!
Also that little blurb under Miller's Furry at the end was amazing. XD There's so many Millers, one of these days I'm gonna have to read up on this Miller stuff!
Anyway congrats on getting this more completed!
# 2
Posted:
Nov 19 2017, 10:14 AM
I also did what I could with some of the visual look, and added dat depth to the previously flat character models~ hopefully there's a noticeable difference
# 1
Posted:
Nov 12 2017, 02:00 AM
I failed to get all the text up for my battle before the timer is up.. this is the complete version of the battle, set to go up after voting is done.
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Nov 26th, 2017
Votes Cast:
11
Page Views:
1467
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