Jamie Chase vs. Nataya Steel

Jamie Chase vs. Nataya Steel

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ManOfDanger
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40 comments
# 4  
thanks for the input, im just a penciler so the inking and the coloring and letter is all thing that make it look good but im not going to try out for any other them...and i do wnat to be better and i took what you said and ill think about it. if you think she looks her waist is long its proable because i drew liek J. Scott Campbell for years and im trying not to do that anymore...but thanks for the input again...and the whoel power thing...umm thats what she does...fights with people with powers and records it, so that is pretty much go to stay...sorry....even tho you still dont know what my chick true powers are.....lol
ok well thansk to everyone that has looked and talked to me about it....

Blindeye
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59 comments
# 3  
Very nice coloring the line quality is pretty decent. However... She looks like Mister Fantastic sometimes... hmmm. And that backflip would have back-flopping on pavement. Oh well. Good stuff anyway, the layout works really nice, but the text was distracting. Too bold. It needs to be subtle and fit your style. Try something less type-writer-ish, though I know that you wanted the folio report look. And this is the first time I\'ve seen so much focus on having \'powers\'... I\'m not sure I like it. It\'s cooler when it\'s subtle.

Molotov
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174 comments
# 2  
Hey, thats pretty cool, I just love Spy Girls in black thigh clothes, good job and welcome.

ManOfDanger
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40 comments
# 1  
ok, this is my first fight, and i hope that everyone likes it.
please tell me if anything is bad or just plain ugly!
thanks

Comic Details -

 
Regular Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 25th, 2003
Votes Cast: 7
Page Views: 1696
Winner: ManOfDanger
 

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