Theres somethin goin on with that panel on page 1 of Click with his face in his hand that isnt quite reading right to me, i had to look at it several times before i realized that was his fingers and not, like, improperly coloured bandages. Other than that i love the drafting and layout of this! the strange, aliased inking was a bit of a distraction though that didnt really match the colouring. Story wise you have me intrigued, why is everyone out to kill the wabbit? so mysterious! finally, i love that every panel of Avery had him smoking even more cigarettes, thats funny XD

They're observing that blue bunny butt

clearly

I think I've told all of you already but I really love this comic.
It was super easy to follow and amusing the whole way.
It works really well as a 3 page comic and I hope to see more of these in the future. I'm hooked.
Also big thanks for the Cin cameo- I wonder what they're all up to. . .

Actually the fault was mine, I used the same method I used for the other longer collab I am working on, the problem came from the fact I didnt notice the file size was much smaller then I am normally used to working at and so the thinner lines kept pixelating when drawn out, besides that hiccup the thinness was on purpose even to the point that some of the line work was left open. which is fine, the comic was more for experimentation since it was much smaller and lent itself to seeing what worked and what didn't.

Definitely not wrong layer coloring.

This all looks super nice and conveys the mood incredibly well, and now I'm super intrigued into the whole plot these *four* characters are in, but if I have one complaint, it's that the method you used to scale down the artwork (without the lettering, it looks like) is very not good. All the jaggediness, I'm nearly certain, is from whatever algorithm you're using just picking a pixel in the original size to have represent an entire area, and not taking some sort of average of it. It's really distracting! Whatever program you're using, I'm sure there's a better way?

(Or maybe Pyras is right and it's just a wrong layer, Iunno.)

This was cool, crew! I like the every-thickening plot being displayed

But I knocked the quality score because I really dislike what is going on with these lines and their pixel-jagged business. The lines become so razor thin at times it looks like a mistake, like you fill-bucketed on the same layer as the lines and lost some of it in the process

snap ! Click gotta better watch his fluffy butt. There's motherhugging Mr Murder after him, and Ma and msGrey are behind it??? what's your plan Ma? SPEAK TO ME YO DEVIOUS CANSOUP

This turned out really well! I had no trouble following the story and I felt like everything was colored and shaded well within the color schemes you had. My only nitpick would be that avery's form in the first panel of the last page seems kinda off. Not sure if it was a result of perspective or style, but yeah, that's all the feedback i've got. Great job everyone!

TOMORROW IS THE DAYYYYYYYYYYYY (at least in my timezone. I'm very excited!)

Very interesting ingredients.
You have 30 minutes to prepare an entree dish--time starts now!

hot diggity! Good luck all!

Tomato soup anyone?

I can dig it

Nice!!

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