This was a good fight even with and an "F" entry by Punk.

Sorry, bad english.  I meant I purposely pushed myself on this battle to try to do more than I knew I'd be able to just to see how much I could pull off at the wire.  The fact that I managed to color 2 pages when I originally thought I wouldn't have time to color any actually inspired me more than the opposite.

are you forfetting yo!? ;_;  

Thanks guys, appreciate the C&Cs.  This first fight was really for me to figure my limitations, so I went as far as I could go.  Hopefully, future battles will be a bit more balanced.  If not, then at least the writing should be ok.

I was in the same boat as Phil...Joe, I had no idea what to expect from you and you definitely exceeded my expectations. Good job, I hope things only get better for you.

AAUUGH!! You punk'd Punk Rock Girl!!

Slack: To be honest I wasn't expecting much from ya, but it seems that you know how to put a good storyline together, I really liked how the battle was planned out, but the art however could use some work of course, if you would of colored all of the comic my score in that area would be higher. But anywho, you've got my vote no matter what!


A very entertaining comic, Keep it up or something?

dude, i like the story, AND the aweomse gun designs. and the dialogue is pretty solid. to bad it wasnt fully colored, and i would have liked to see more hand drawn bgs. "I AM SO DORKED"!! that was gold!

hewhoisknot i can't see ur submisisons =(

...sigh.. comp broke... saddly no coloring for me

No worries there.  Prepare to be impressed, Or at least amused.  Maybe.

guys, u better go all out on this one!

WooHoo!  Let there be much rockage.  And much good luck to you, opponent mine.