Tab vs. JPOP

Tab vs. JPOP

by Mo Rice

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justarhymes
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654 comments
# 11   Posted: Dec 26 2012, 11:25 AM
Thanks for the comments.

Bobo: I am surprised you noticed that. Vengeful  GVSR with fire backdrop is a go-to shot ;3

Kozi: I was testing out Manga Studio for this comic. I just wanted to see some things that I could do with it. You are right, the backgrounds don't really work, and  I wouldn't use them in a legit comic.

Mo: For sure, man. I've gotta do part two of this one day.

Mo Rice
Artist
14 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 25 2012, 10:06 PM
Thanks Jordan and Kozi; also Kozi, you can go ahead and say it. The quality is pretty below my usual register. All I really need to work on is time management. Wish I could've got it down packed sooner, so I could've polished it out a lot more. Anywho, expect more from me; & Justar, our characters shall meet again. Just need to work on a bit of character development and all that jazz in the next battles.  

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 24 2012, 11:16 AM
MO RICE- omigosh what did I just read?? XD short sweet and pretty funny although I have to admit I had to listen to the VOIDcast before I realized the things on J-Pops hands were dildos. I loved the nod to the oldschool haunts like P2's club. I'm always a fan of fighters who bring established hot spots that've been on other battles. I am a bit surprised at the quality despite the 4week timeline. :/

JUSTARHYMES- really nice storytelling. Starting off after the fact and unfolding the events explaining Santas situation was really great. Even the angles used like on page 7 seeing J-pop from between naked Santas legs made the delivery doubly funny. I'm not so sure about using screen tones and patterns like the flowers used on the same page. Your work is real distinct and has strong thick lines so the flowers didnt seem to fit.

All in all silly and enjoyable submissions from you both :)

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 21 2012, 09:53 AM
justarhymes: Page 4, panel 4. Looks kinda familiar... I think his facial expression is all wrong, though. But seriously man, so much nostalgia and hilarity. And I love GVSR's blood on the last page. Why are you so effing funny dude?

Mo Rice: I was really confused, but thoroughly entertained.

Mo Rice
Artist
14 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 20 2012, 10:34 PM
Yeah, it was a close one; I almost didn't make it to the Micky D's Wifi in time; also my neighbor just got wifi today. So I'ma just cancel my shindig and save myself some monies. No use for two internets! We came to an agreement that I would pay a fraction to share bandwith and get the password. Also glad you liked, i've been a stalker in void for quite some time. I'm a solid fan of the old school voiders. You also put down a pretty solid comic, and loved what you did with Tab; the dialog had me rolling the whole time.

justarhymes
Artist
654 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 20 2012, 03:53 PM
Glad you found a way to get it in, Mo. Your comic was a flashback to OLD old school Void, which was a little refreshing. I enjoyed the twist on your last page. It was classy.

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 16 2012, 02:24 PM
Whoa blast from the past! :3

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 23 2012, 02:48 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwyeah.

justarhymes
Artist
654 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 22 2012, 12:32 AM
Looking forward to this.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 21 2012, 11:07 AM
Oh hey. Welcome back!

Mo Rice
Artist
14 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 21 2012, 10:48 AM
This oughtta be a swanky work out. I won't dissapoint this time around.

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