Angie: You definitely have me on the grey tones, damn shame I didn\'t put more effort into them. It has to do with the problem I have with growing tiered gradually as I make them and the tones are the last step. So more dicipline will be needed for the next time.

Kuro: Okay, seems stiffness will be one of my priorities to work on, life drawing classes here i come!

Bittermause: Dammit, now thats all I\'m seeing too DX
And about the arm, yeah, probably should have made the one in the back a bit more visible.

Thanks a lot for the crits, they mean much to me! Hopefully I\'ll be locked in battle pretty soon.

Linus-It\'s good to see you back in action! Art wise this was a pretty nice step up for you, the hatching worked very well and you had some nice looking figures and backgrounds. Be careful with the gray toning as there are some areas where it looked kind of sloppy which killed what you had going. Story wise I didn\'t find it confusing, although it may have been good to give the audience a little more background info on who the guy in his mind was so it would have effected us a little more emotionally to see Marcus getting possessed.

nice. the hatching was good. the poses seemed a little stiff though. nice detail on the figure warping & transitioning towards the end there. i don\'t know much about the continuity or anything & it seemed like i\'d need to in order to find it entertaining. character seems neat though & i\'d like to see what you have in store now that you\'ve brought him back

-J

Great to see you back Linus!
I had no problem understanding what was going on in your comic. It was a simple story and straight to the point. It took me a second to remember who Andras was, but only because your last comics didn\'t feature him. I\'m glad you resurfaced that character since he did play an important role in Marcus\'s being in the first place.
I\'m still jealous over your cross hatching skills and your speed lines, you keep getting better with em each time.
I can only point out two things to crit. Page 4, where Marcus is in mid-air. The position makes him look like he\'s floating and seeing him with his hand on his chest makes me think he\'s about to sing the national anthem.
And on the last page, I notice that the way Marcus\'s right shoulder is cut off it looks like he\'s missing an arm.
 Overall, a great contribution!

Anna: Haha, those damn backgrounds and anatomy feels like an eternal problem for me, but one day..

BornLoser: Well yeah, probably should have written that it isn\'t fully understandable unless you read the former battles, at least a few of them

Also thanks everyone for the nice words!

Interesting. I like it.

The story felt a little confusing to me, Buti guess i should have read the other comics with him before.
The art of the demon guy getting into Marcus body was really great.

Srsly this is sweet! I hope to see more from you!

Lovely job Linus, I really like your hatching, the anatomy and backgrounds could use a little work. but over all it was very good.