Now the hat was quite an interesting touch.  Not that I\'d be putting it on my head any time soon...

Damn guys, that was madness.

DH - I think your\'s relied too heavilly on dialogue to move the story along.  I hope you come back with a new character, because it was still a very nice battle.

Sketch - I was a little scared looking at the first page, but page two wiped that out and gave the whole thing a very Alice in Wonderland feel.  Awesome all-around, but the word balloons could have used some work, mostly with making it more clear who was talking.  still an awesome battle.

dheuk, you\'ve got a great style and the art was very nice, but it all seemed a bit bland to me. The ending was clever, but I feel you could have done a lot more to get there. Good work nonetheless.

sketch, impressive to say the least. The twist was very cool, and I love the way you tied in real life. My votes go to you.

thanks for the comments guys, and thank you dheuk for the fight. i like the way you have Gallidaysay talk. i am sorry i was not able to finish coloring in the pages. i am still going to finish the pages and post them in the forum so that you all can see it the way i ment it to be seen. i think i found a style that i am comfy with.
but lets see where this goes.

dheuk - quite a nice little entry. Pretty clever and awfully cute. Art was alright but it begs to be in colour! Overall a good first battle.

Sketch - the expression here are priceless..yuo have got such an animated way of portraying faces. Great battle and it was good for a chuckle. I\'m glad the art cleared up after the 1st panel. My nod goes to you.

I too liked them both very much...Gallidaysay..bluh blu... thats a mouth full...very nice pencils, Wendy\'s was nice but a little to anime for my taste.  Good work both of you...

geez...these fighst were killer...both had some twisted endings good work to both of you.