This seems dashed off when compared to your previous works, but I'm going to assume time was working against you there. Might want to not spell out stuff so much storywise. too.
Still, I do like the design of your character, and am lookin' forward to seeing him kick some ass.
Intro Story / Micheal St. Miller
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Nov 5 2011, 01:01 PM
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