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Sounds cool! Definitely want in on this!

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Bagman
« on: Dec 15, 2014, 11:09 PM »
changed.



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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Bagman
« on: Dec 10, 2014, 05:45 PM »
Thanks, especially the stuff about the first page. I'm gonna go back and fix those.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Bagman
« on: Dec 09, 2014, 09:31 PM »
Got tablet problems, had to save up to get a new one. Anyway:







Made these, any thoughts?

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Bagman
« on: Jan 21, 2014, 11:07 PM »
Wow guys, thanks so much for the feedback. You guys are right, I really do care about my comics and I didn't wanna give off a vibe of being lazy, so sorry about that .

@Bobo, Really good points, thanks for the tips. Yeah, I was trying to show disgust and annoyance on the first panel(the blank white page was because me screwing up the legs of the big guy though).

I'm gonna go back to the page and apply the stuff you mentioned.

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Reviews / Re: So what comics are you reading?
« on: Jan 20, 2014, 10:53 AM »
I haven't really been reading much comics lately(ironically after I swore off reading superhero comics, I realized that was 99% of what I read). But recently I've been really getting into Moebius' stuff, like Blueberry and The Incal.

I thought Blueberry was cool, Incal was alright. Something about it's story didn't jell with me.

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Bagman
« on: Jan 20, 2014, 10:32 AM »
Page 1, went grayscale so I could do the pages fast. I'm debating whether or not to add shading or leave it flat, I dunno. Anyway:


Back to drawing :D

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THE INCUBATOR / Re: Bagman
« on: Jan 19, 2014, 08:05 PM »
The only thing I'd want to know is, are his eyes always like that? Like, little white orbs with no pupils? If you could toss in maybe two or three different expressions that would be great  ^.^

Usually, though if they're extreme expressions or I want him to look somewhere I'd give him pupils.
EDIT: Expressions, okay. I'll put that in the Design Sheet.

He seems pretty carefree fellow, but don't worry - that will change soon enough.

*stare of death* OH IT'S ON!

as for the intro pages, I should have 'em up soon. Trying to make sure I don't turn in trash.

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THE INCUBATOR / Bagman
« on: Jan 19, 2014, 07:15 AM »
I was gonna wait until I finished the Intro Story for him but
might as well get some thoughts first.



Full Name: Paper Bagman
Sex: Male
Age: 21 and three quarters
Height: 5'1"
Bio: Paper Bagman, he's a man with a bag on his head...made of paper. Once a mild-mannered employee of a franchise fast food restaurant, Bagman decided a life of providing cheaply made process meat wasn't for him. What he really wanted was a life of excitement, adventure, the life of a Hero! So, after a brief training montage, Bagman was born! With a tentative knowledge of every type of martial art known to man(and a few made up ones), and a super sharp sword made out of the cardboard box he found laying in the alley that one time, Bagman heroically fights evil all across the globe! ...Or at least from a comfortable walking distance from his apartment.

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New here? / Re: INTRODUCE YOURSELF
« on: Jan 19, 2014, 05:39 AM »
Incubator, got it. I'll go check it out.

"Also- VOID is in a video?? no way! Which one and where can I see it?"

Well, A artist I like mentioned it one of his art vids (4:03 - 4:23)

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New here? / Re: INTRODUCE YOURSELF
« on: Jan 19, 2014, 05:05 AM »
Um...hi?

Yeah I'm Byth1, and I uh, like to draw comics...:D. Heard about this place from a video and decided to check it out(looks pretty awesome so far). Right now I'm working on creating a character to submit, so I guess I'll hang the forums until I'm done.

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