Hahah...you guys made me spaz out with all the fan servicing. Thank you, thank you.
Unfortunately, I have no well thought out critiques. I\'m just here to squeal like piggly fangirl, especially for pi-e, since I\'ve always been waiting for another battle from her. Both of your entries were fabulous, and like Kotori said, I admire Pi-e\'s nice, clean art that looks so professional to me. You are just great at drawing the hottest, most softest looking girls ever, and I laughed at that \"I wish I was lesbian\" part. Thank you<3
And Duredhel\'s pages were all so detailed! So. Much. Details. I really love that about comics. I also like how well you ended your section by giving us a peek of possible story for your next battle, maybe? I\'d like to see that as quickly as possible. And thanks for saving my life with that tentacle jokes.
You guys can cook me dinner any day<3
Aja Reiche vs. Anya
Critiques & Comments
# 18
Posted:
Jul 17 2007, 01:09 AM
# 17
Posted:
Jul 15 2007, 06:38 PM
It\'s hard to leave crits for some battles... simply because it\'s hard to find faults. XD But like I promised, I shall take a shot at it.
Pi-e, I totally enjoyed your side of the battle. Your crisp lines do very well with your style of coloring. And the fan service bits were hilarious. (And the naked Akantha, chibi or no, was just plain wrong. And yes, I noticed it.) There really isn\'t too terribly much I can find WRONG with it. And I looked. Really, I did. >_> Yours was the smoother flow, storywise, though... so you got slightly higher score in that area.
Dure, I love how you color... and your linework is also something that appeals to me. In that aspect, I gave you slightly higher points in the art quality. It\'s a smoother softer art, but that is a matter of preference here. What did get you lower points was your side felt more choppy, esp at the very end when it went from extreme goofiness to Logos(woot, good to see her show up). This might also be a preference, but it might have worked better if you had just shown a glimps of Logos... a taste? The longer 2 pages with her talking was a very sharp contrast to the previous battle pages and was distracting from it.
In the end, I had a hard time critting this. I\'m sure others will do a better job, but there are my 2 cents. :\\ Sorry it wasn\'t more helpful.
Pi-e, I totally enjoyed your side of the battle. Your crisp lines do very well with your style of coloring. And the fan service bits were hilarious. (And the naked Akantha, chibi or no, was just plain wrong. And yes, I noticed it.) There really isn\'t too terribly much I can find WRONG with it. And I looked. Really, I did. >_> Yours was the smoother flow, storywise, though... so you got slightly higher score in that area.
Dure, I love how you color... and your linework is also something that appeals to me. In that aspect, I gave you slightly higher points in the art quality. It\'s a smoother softer art, but that is a matter of preference here. What did get you lower points was your side felt more choppy, esp at the very end when it went from extreme goofiness to Logos(woot, good to see her show up). This might also be a preference, but it might have worked better if you had just shown a glimps of Logos... a taste? The longer 2 pages with her talking was a very sharp contrast to the previous battle pages and was distracting from it.
In the end, I had a hard time critting this. I\'m sure others will do a better job, but there are my 2 cents. :\\ Sorry it wasn\'t more helpful.
# 16
Posted:
Jul 14 2007, 10:50 PM
Thanks so much for the votes and comments, and thank you for the battle Pi-e, you know how much I adore your stuff so no need repeating it. Anyhow, ANY constructive criticism will be well received tho. Since we can\'t see exactly what scores we got in what categories until the voting is over, we dunno what we were lacking, what was bad and what was good. So really, any comments with possible improvements or particularly good points we should repeat in future battles will be amazing. After all, we both joined to learn ^^
# 15
Posted:
Jul 14 2007, 11:17 AM
Logos <333
love both entries, guys
love both entries, guys
# 14
Posted:
Jul 14 2007, 10:53 AM
great work, both of you =D
I had a great time reading both ^^
I had a great time reading both ^^
# 13
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 10:48 PM
both comics were very well done, the quality was amazing and very impressive on both your parts. <3
# 12
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 04:26 PM
paris hilton IS a douche
# 11
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 12:17 PM
You bastard, stop besting me in everything :I
Dude, Diego, you made it so cute ;__; I love all the sarcastic remarks being tossed around, and your greyscale was MUCH better than my monochrome attempt. You had so much detail that really captivated me while reading. Oh WHY must you draw the girls so cute ;3;
<3<3<3
cheers, mate, good fight!
Dude, Diego, you made it so cute ;__; I love all the sarcastic remarks being tossed around, and your greyscale was MUCH better than my monochrome attempt. You had so much detail that really captivated me while reading. Oh WHY must you draw the girls so cute ;3;
<3<3<3
cheers, mate, good fight!
# 10
Posted:
Jul 13 2007, 10:28 AM
Pi-e: interesting format! i loved it and it really kept me reading =]
Duredel: the colored pages were awesome XD
Both of you did a kick ass job! Can\'t wait to see what you two come up with next!
Duredel: the colored pages were awesome XD
Both of you did a kick ass job! Can\'t wait to see what you two come up with next!
# 9
Posted:
Jul 6 2007, 07:32 AM
This could prove to be awesome, kick much ass guys
# 8
Posted:
Jul 5 2007, 11:36 PM
rootin\' for ya dur, kick some butt!
I won\'t be unfair, though! :x
I won\'t be unfair, though! :x
# 7
Posted:
Jul 4 2007, 11:00 PM
I was hoping you\'d hurry up and battle some more, pi-e. I\'m happy to see you up again!
# 6
Posted:
Jul 4 2007, 02:10 PM
This is gonna be aces!
ahah Durehel must be crazy right now :O
ahah Durehel must be crazy right now :O
# 5
Posted:
Jul 4 2007, 07:17 AM
nice ^^,
# 4
Posted:
Jul 3 2007, 03:42 PM
GO ANYA!! Kick some ass!
# 3
Posted:
Jul 3 2007, 02:42 PM
<3333 *squees
# 2
Posted:
Jul 3 2007, 12:20 PM
Yay! I was wondering when we\'d get to see these characters again!
# 1
Posted:
Jul 3 2007, 10:17 AM
First comment! HAHA!
I can\'t wait to see this battle up and in its full glory. Blow us away, per usual. <3
I can\'t wait to see this battle up and in its full glory. Blow us away, per usual. <3
Regular Match
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2 weeks
Ended:
Jul 20th, 2007
Votes Cast:
51
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2128
Winner:
pi-e
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It\'s an even bigger compliment considering I usually don\'t enjoy comics in B&W. =P