I wasn't really confident with how much room I had to tell a story, so I wrote it really minimalist. Probably too minimalist, in retrospect (obviously). I feel the need to work on my panels and how much detail I can fit into a page.

I think this was good for me to get something actually done, and I hope to improve upon this in future comics.

...That's it?

I feel like I've been popped into the middle of a comic and only given a couple pages. How does it end? What's going on? Is this just an ongoing tale which requires the reading of previous battles?

You have engaging angles which work well with what you're trying to illustrate however you need to work your compositions a bit more so each of your panels feel filled and have weight for all the space they're taking up.

Some panels can have a modicum of empty space but often that is balanced with filled engaging panels that are on the same space.

Really just DRAW more draw more and edit down.

I wish you hadn't done the contrast that way. I honestly don't like the grainy way it made it look. And I'd like to see you use more line variation bro(anatomy, facial shapes, noses. Sorry bro. Just being honest) I also wish you'd made it feel more like it had an end.

All pages uploaded! (Well, I uploaded them as soon as I started this)

Thanks Angie for all your help. Hope everyone enjoys the comic.