Speed Death Tournament 2018, Round 2 / Usagi vs. Eon
Critiques & Comments
# 10
Posted:
Feb 11 2018, 05:00 PM
Ahhhh this was such a good fight! I loved the animations in Indigobee's comic, and WOW I've not really seen color from Monday before! I love the freshness going on in this fight! A+ you two!
# 9
Posted:
Feb 11 2018, 04:02 PM
You both are going to make a factory blush both of these comic were great! I loved the colors and the art direction on display here the pixel art was so unique and those colors were a rare treat! great job to both of you!
# 8
Posted:
Feb 10 2018, 11:58 AM
Monday: Like everybody else, I found it waaaay easier to follow your comic this time with the colors! It keeps the wild action while adding readability. I also very much appreciated the weird squid teacher.
Indigobee: I really like that you took a different approach on this one! I think it's impressive doing a whole animated pixel comic, even with your time constraints this time around.
Indigobee: I really like that you took a different approach on this one! I think it's impressive doing a whole animated pixel comic, even with your time constraints this time around.
# 7
Posted:
Feb 9 2018, 02:11 AM
Monday: Your colors really stitch your very kinetic style up to the point where everything is suddenly easy to follow and OH MAN do I love your comic. If you keep at this path I am going to be extremely interested in seeing where your adorable samurai does. In short, I loved it man.
Indigo: The animation part was neat, and the way you drew Usagi was actually my favorite part of the comic, very strong undertale vibe for some reason. That said I defiently feel this was weaker then your last entry by quite a bit. But I know you had time issues and the fact that you switched up styles and got a full submission in despite that is hella strong. I can't wait to see what your future charachters and comic be like!
Indigo: The animation part was neat, and the way you drew Usagi was actually my favorite part of the comic, very strong undertale vibe for some reason. That said I defiently feel this was weaker then your last entry by quite a bit. But I know you had time issues and the fact that you switched up styles and got a full submission in despite that is hella strong. I can't wait to see what your future charachters and comic be like!
# 6
Posted:
Feb 6 2018, 10:12 PM
monday the color is working so much in your favor, I liked this a lot! everything was much clearer than your last comic, and was more enjoyable as a result. good stuff!
indigooo I also love the colors in yours. it's cool to see you experiment with other styles! it's a little jarring after your last one was so different in style, but I believe I remember you saying you were having some difficulties (apologies if that wasn't you) which is totally understandable. I definitely want to see more stuff from you after SDT!!
indigooo I also love the colors in yours. it's cool to see you experiment with other styles! it's a little jarring after your last one was so different in style, but I believe I remember you saying you were having some difficulties (apologies if that wasn't you) which is totally understandable. I definitely want to see more stuff from you after SDT!!
# 5
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 03:59 PM
you know my deal, Indigo. i'm into this comic. still, i agree with jellyraptor, i do wish the fight had gone on for a panel or so more. as well as my disappointment regarding a decrease in background complexity from your previous comic. (pixel art is tiring A/F though. props for doing a whole globbing comic in it)
Monday, nice art m'dude. this style is much tastier. while i found that changing eon's (admittedly vague) personality could have been avoided, and the comic felt a tad unnecessarily drawn out, i gotta give you props.
nice work, both of you. may the best artist win
Monday, nice art m'dude. this style is much tastier. while i found that changing eon's (admittedly vague) personality could have been avoided, and the comic felt a tad unnecessarily drawn out, i gotta give you props.
nice work, both of you. may the best artist win
# 4
Posted:
Feb 5 2018, 10:38 AM
Monday, I'm glad you decided to do this on in color, it's much more comprehensive than your last entry artwise. Besides that I still like your loose style here as it compliments the action, I think, and I just love how you incorporate the separate stories going on within the tournament, including Steph and picking up where Eon's last comic left off. makes for a more cohesive and, in my opinion, satisfying story.
Indigo, this was short and sweet. The colros are nice and I like the premise. I would have liked to see a bit more of a fight between them but I get that animation takes time. And the fact that it's animated at all is great. Really sets your entry appart, so great job going the extra mile
Indigo, this was short and sweet. The colros are nice and I like the premise. I would have liked to see a bit more of a fight between them but I get that animation takes time. And the fact that it's animated at all is great. Really sets your entry appart, so great job going the extra mile
# 3
Posted:
Feb 1 2018, 10:51 AM
It's a shame robots don't contain gallons of blood. Or have lives to take :3c
# 2
Posted:
Jan 30 2018, 03:05 PM
Thank you brentony! And good luck monday, hope ya are ready to get murdered :3c
# 1
Posted:
Jan 29 2018, 11:48 AM
Hyyyyype! Can't wait to see how you kids kill each other! >:3
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Feb 11th, 2018
Votes Cast:
33
Page Views:
2008
Winner:
Monday
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Indigobee: As your format is "text based game" motif, your establishing shots and set pieces are where your comic truly shines. I kind of felt like the actual deed could have used a little more oomf, but you ended on a great final shot.