Sonny del Salvador vs. Leo Johnson

Sonny del Salvador vs. Leo Johnson

by Coatl

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by TKDZen

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Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 22   Posted: Jun 26 2013, 06:26 PM
TKDZen: Thank you all for your comments regarding my entry to this battle! I appreciate that you all liked what I was able to produce. It took me a while to actually start the damn thing, really. BUT, my next entry will be a Beyond Battle, filled with glorious(not really) coloring, and professional looking lines.

Coatl:

I would like to battle you again, sometime. Hopefully, we'll both be much better and can draw up a battle that all of VOID can recognize!
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Well I'm submitting part one of my side today and will spend time on a secret project as well as part 2. Hope I do Leo some bit of justice by then.

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 21   Posted: Jun 26 2013, 09:36 AM
Thank you all for your comments regarding my entry to this battle! I appreciate that you all liked what I was able to produce. It took me a while to actually start the damn thing, really. BUT, my next entry will be a Beyond Battle, filled with glorious(not really) coloring, and professional looking lines.

Puzzlething:

I'll try to be more careful with my hatching in the future. I was rushing to ink it in four days lol

Coatl:

I would like to battle you again, sometime. Hopefully, we'll both be much better and can draw up a battle that all of VOID can recognize!

ColdShoulderAve
Artist
33 comments
# 20   Posted: Jun 24 2013, 03:15 PM
Zen: This was an awesome comic. Some detailed backgrounds. And I loved the panels with clear foreground like bottom right corner of page 10, and middle right of page 8. I'm excited to see what happens next.

Puzzlething
Artist
457 comments
# 19   Posted: Jun 24 2013, 11:14 AM
TKDZEN             -

                    You should be a little more careful with your hatching. The point of those lines is to describe the object underneath them, but your hatching often loops together at the ends, destroying that illusion. Make sure you pick your tool up off the page to make each line.

                     I like the handlettering way more than the font, but I think you could thin the lines of your letters a little bit to make them more readable.

                 Your attention to detail and personality in the setting is so so great, as is the strength and variety of your poses. I love the weightlifting pose, you can totally feel the tension and struggle in it. Awesome work dude!

Goldie
Artist
100 comments
# 18   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 02:59 PM
Kinu: Yeah, we get it that Ernesto didn't finish on time, but is anyone gonna mention that Tk's comic was awesome as hell?
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I'll just slap myself in the face fore not commenting earlier-- But yeah! Zen, your comic was just amazing! I love Lucas' redesign. And Leena's subtle one too~ Shoot, I loved the way everyone was portrayed. And I see massive improvement with your buildings, as well as the comical panels. For example, I didn't notice at first, but in the first panel of page 7, I saw Lucas weight lifting teddy bears and I proceeded to bust out laughing. Your work is awesome, so keep it up!

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 17   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 02:03 PM
Impressive work Zen!! I love the fluidity of your lines--lots of inky goodness. Very much enjoyed the workout montage--the nice poses and composition of each panel--especially the handstand panel. The subtle sweat drops on the kid sold the scene for me! Oh, and the buildings. The town was drawn with a lot of personality, and it felt very rustic and lived-in.

I sort of wasn't up on who all the characters were, as it's been a while since I reread your last comics, but Sonny's exposition was enough to fill me in a little bit. I will read up on it, and I definitely look forward to the next part of this saga. Great work!

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 16   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 01:21 PM
Kinu: Yeah, we get it that Ernesto didn't finish on time, but is anyone gonna mention that Tk's comic was awesome as hell?
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Oh yeah TKD fucking rocked this shit, and I'm glad that he got it in dispite the guilt I have for not getting mine in.
So for that i thnak you, bro.

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 15   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 12:44 PM
Yeah, we get it that Ernesto didn't finish on time, but is anyone gonna mention that Tk's comic was awesome as hell?

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 14   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 12:37 PM
Sorry guys, DONT TRIP. I GOT THEM PAGES. TODAY'S MY DAD'S BDAY, BUT I'M FINISHING UP, SUVMTTING AS A BB!

Goldie
Artist
100 comments
# 13   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 09:57 AM
Aww, I was looking forward to both of these.

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 12   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 09:31 AM
.....

MyHatsEatPeople
Artist
408 comments
# 11   Posted: Jun 20 2013, 08:39 AM
Nooooo Ernesto why

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 19 2013, 03:17 PM
Coatl:
TKDZen: Just uploaded my kawmick! I started super late due to a slump I was in, so I didn't exactly produce everything I wanted to... But, I think I did a smashing job for a comic that I kept changing a lot lol
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Cool, I got work in a few hours till midnight so I'm scanning the pages I ended up doing. i'm pretty proud of it too.
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Have you uploaded it already? I was trying to ask Angie to post the battle early if possible

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 19 2013, 10:09 AM
TKDZen: Just uploaded my kawmick! I started super late due to a slump I was in, so I didn't exactly produce everything I wanted to... But, I think I did a smashing job for a comic that I kept changing a lot lol
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Cool, I got work in a few hours till midnight so I'm scanning the pages I ended up doing. i'm pretty proud of it too.

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 19 2013, 04:01 AM
Just uploaded my kawmick! I started super late due to a slump I was in, so I didn't exactly produce everything I wanted to... But, I think I did a smashing job for a comic that I kept changing a lot lol

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 18 2013, 04:30 PM
Whoa whoa whoa how did I miss this!? So hyped!

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 18 2013, 04:25 PM
Coatl, brah, y'better deliver somethin'!

TKDZen
Artist
33 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 18 2013, 04:10 PM
Almost.....done! asketga;weghiwegneroh

Julz
Artist
411 comments
# 4   Posted: May 17 2013, 08:40 AM
Make it a good one!! I want to be stunned!

Kinu
Artist
150 comments
# 3   Posted: May 16 2013, 10:17 PM
HYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYPE

Energy
Artist
139 comments
# 2   Posted: May 16 2013, 03:02 PM
I am definitely looking forward to this comic.

otakutaylor
Artist
183 comments
# 1   Posted: May 16 2013, 04:19 AM
Man, the PPP for these comics is going to be insane! I can't wait to see what you two have in store~
(That's Punches Per Panel)

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