TransModo

TransModo

by Kuro

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JoshuaEliGilley
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462 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 28 2011, 11:41 AM
Coming along great Kuro, watch out with the super wordy pages though, you almost lost me, maybe once I am more endeared to the characters and know there personalities I'll put up with them talking for paragraphs on end...but maybe too soon for mountains of dialogue, or at least stagger it, like i got through the "letter" boxes section fine, only to find myself in triple/quad word bubble zone, cut to the point a lil more would be my only suggestion or stagger some not-so-wordy pages in there. Regardless, I'm excited to see the story unfold, ya got me hooked in.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 22 2011, 12:00 PM
Nice! I love it dude.

I'll be awaiting what you do with this next! And don't apologize to me, you should see MY entry. Yours is pretty amazing in comparison bro. I also think that the fact that you wanna go back and make this the most amazing thing is exactly what I was hoping that people would do and I'm really glad to see you will be. I like this comic, so keep it up man :D

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 21 2011, 09:14 PM
Submitted. Looks like everyone in the challenge was in the same boat. I couldn't ink & got lax with bg's towards the end. Text isn't paced very nicely either.

Not done with this one yet. More to come soon-ish.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 19 2011, 06:32 AM
why on earth was i thinking i had more days than i do?! this is gonna hurt.

Coatl
Artist
320 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 8 2011, 03:46 PM
good luck

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 8 2011, 03:34 PM
Can't wait bro, I am super excited to see this second part.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 7 2011, 06:49 AM
Part Two is go.
18 pages or so to make the 22.
I redesigned a couple of things. Might throw the continuity off but I don't want to have to redo this again once I start it as a GN, so I might just roll with the new designs & let the scores fall where they may.

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