MrPR: This was a fun little interaction and break from your current story. I do agree with Pyras that you should push yourself a bit more with your comics. Even something simple like more tree silhouetted would have helped sell the park feel for this, In general i have found that the more stuff you add to a background the less you have to worry about the individual quality of each element, it's hard to notice one tree out of place in a forest compared to when there's only 3 trees. I would also like to see some shading on your characters to help add a bit of extra depth.

Marymuscle: good luck with stuff and look forward to seeing whatever comics you are able to do in the future.

MrPr: Pretty simple comic, for a brief encounter it works well enough and your lines and fills are clean enough. Now that you've reached this level it's a good time to start working on some new goals to improve on: You already know you've got aways to go with backgrounds, I'm gonna assume that the sheer lack of them in this comic was due to time constraints more than anything else so I won't harp on it much here. This is also a good time to re-evaluate how you make your word balloons, as the borders between the balloon line and the letters are often too close for comfort, making for a claustrophobic read; try to work on giving your words a bit a more room to breath in their word balloons, and conforming both as necessary to make a more pleasant reading experience

Marymuscle: hope everything is okay and that we see stuff from you in the future

this two girls are going to have fun wrestling i bet >:3

Big blue girl VS Stretchy red girl~