CORNBREAD- Ma, you sneaky old so and so. You just spreading strife wherever you go!
I think the panel i keep turning the pages and going back to is page three. I wanted so much more of that sudden dip into dread. The words spelled out on Ma's globe and that dynamically posed hand were just everything. I could eat up that panel. Eat it up like so much pipin' hot alphabet soup.
You definitely shine when you employ this heavy shadowed ink style you have- especially in the ominous color palate you had in that page three sequence. You also kind of went hog wild with exaggerated lines of motion. Click zooming off cuz he's late is something I've never seen before outside of an animated cartoon, but in comics it looks pretty neat! If any of this is you experimenting and foraying about, I fully encourage more of this.
I know Ma's font is supposed to be fluffy and kind of big, but be mindful of your word bubbles. Some word formatting would greatly benefit you in making your dialogue fit better into your word bubbles.
There's a Hare in my Soup / Ma vs. Click Lyric
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Feb 17 2017, 09:59 PM
# 7
Posted:
Feb 14 2017, 09:56 AM
Corn. Son. Damn.
I'd make a statement about how this ended with a bang, but you already beat me to the punchline.
That said, I do have questions about this set-up. Was this an act conducted by Ma? Is it all some spectacular happenstance? And will these destructive forces continue to occur when our soupy sociopath graces the scene with his presence? Things are heating up!
I'd make a statement about how this ended with a bang, but you already beat me to the punchline.
That said, I do have questions about this set-up. Was this an act conducted by Ma? Is it all some spectacular happenstance? And will these destructive forces continue to occur when our soupy sociopath graces the scene with his presence? Things are heating up!
# 6
Posted:
Feb 14 2017, 08:05 AM
As Technicolor-yawn mentioned, they did not finish their comic. In fact, they did not draw their opponent, Ma, in their comic at all. This is unfortunately considered a default according to the site rules. When the pages are removed you will be able to vote on Corn's comic. Sorry guys, remember for next time that all characters must be included in order for your comic to be posted for voting.
# 5
Posted:
Feb 14 2017, 04:05 AM
Technicolor-yawn: Man, this comic got away from me. It's unfinished, and what is there is Chaos. Apologies Corn! I'll try to finish this in some form later tho.
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It is fine, a lot of us came to void to improve and time management is one thing all of us could practice. Im glad we had the opportunity to battle, though it is a bummer you didnt get to finish I was really looking forward to you beating me down and that comic you were working on looked super trick! hopefully we can work together on future projects
# 4
Posted:
Feb 13 2017, 10:58 PM
Man, this comic got away from me. It's unfinished, and what is there is Chaos. Apologies Corn! I'll try to finish this in some form later tho.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 6 2017, 07:32 PM
I'm already gripping the seat. Best of luck to you both!
# 2
Posted:
Feb 6 2017, 07:17 PM
oh my! good luck, cant wait!
# 1
Posted:
Feb 6 2017, 06:56 PM
Rabbit soup sounds good right about now
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Feb 20th, 2017
Votes Cast:
22
Page Views:
1599
Winner:
Corn Of The Breads
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