I'll leave this here.

Sadly I reside in Sactown.

Sacramento is boring but soon I will be reppin' Carson, LA area.
I'll be going to Japan expo in August and I'm not sure if anyone is going to be going to that one.

Quote from: CrunchMcbuttsteak on Jul 12, 2013, 04:37 PM

Your comic pages are lovely but I am very confused as to what is going on.
Like Wei and the others said, it's clear you're pretty talented aesthetically but if you could just make the comic flow a bit clearer cause maybe it's me but I'm not sure what he just tried to do? Did he save them?
Also your perspective on the buildings is very off. At first glance it looks okay but on second glance and if you look closer they don't look right.

Lovely otherwise.

Actually the vanishing points on all her lines in the backgrounds seem to end up at the same spot if you take any kind of straight edge and measure.
I agree with you on the flow, but it may also be partially because there's no clear distinction between the beginning and end of each page the way she's got them posted. Plot-wise I was able to understand the comic completely.

Perhaps I might've read it wrong. Reading it again it makes a bit more sense so that was my mistake on that part.

But I simply do not agree with you on her perspective. Because there are two major perspective mistakes that I can see, and maybe I wasn't being specific on exactly what it was.
 
The first one being the first panel, where the girls are standing together. They are not standing perpendicular to the road. This is basing it on the angle of their standing position and the direction of the road lines. The environment suggests that it's horizontally flat. Kinda shown from the other panels. But there the road's curved and looks like they're going uphill or something.

The second would be the second panel which was my main concern and what caught my eye, looks like an attempt at 3 point perspective but alas there is a lot of distortion going on especially on the glass building to the side where the lines are crooked. Lastly the lines detailing on the building with the plants don't converge.

Sorry if I didn't properly give you a detailed crit explaining what exactly was needed to be fixed. So I hope this helps clear things up. u_u;

Your comic pages are lovely but I am very confused as to what is going on.
Like Wei and the others said, it's clear you're pretty talented aesthetically but if you could just make the comic flow a bit clearer cause maybe it's me but I'm not sure what he just tried to do? Did he save them?
Also your perspective on the buildings is very off. At first glance it looks okay but on second glance and if you look closer they don't look right.

Lovely otherwise.

You have no idea how much I love her. I cant wait to see her in, I've got my eye on herrrrr. *u*!

Woops, I made Monday a thing. Have a Mars.

Heres mine dudes!

http://queencrunchmcbuttsteak.tumblr.com
I have a side bar with a link to my tagged art. I post a lot of misc but i do post art. Pretty much my tumblr is a look into my brain.

Hnngh, you guys are too sweet. Thanks, I will slowly but surely be creeping myself back here again. It's been my plan to come back so I intend to do so.
I hope to get better while I'm here I'm a bit rusty when it comes to comics and hope to push myself some more. ;u; <3

Holy hell, it's still here. What even if this. Here's my update on how I've been doing art wise. Commence the weeping, as in I'm the one doing the weeping.
























I will post sketches sometime later. u_u;

You guys kidding right?
Why does this thread have like no replies?
I love your work Kev, your sketches are probably my favorite from you, and your inks are equally as nice.
Please post more.

Quote from: Kevin Birtcher on Jan 28, 2010, 06:02 PM

Updated again.

Somebody count that, I've lost track... I think there were 42.



I'll make a deal: If we get stuck at 47 applicants, I'll even let Johnny play.

MAAAAAN, You should let Johnny play anyways! I mean, it's all just for fun, right? The dude tries, and I've been helping him lately with his comics, and hounding his ass about doing shit. I definitely told him to fix that terrible hand written text, haha.

The dude has stuck around this long, and still wants to do stuff, why not just let him? He's taking this 'banned from void comics' thing a whole helluva lot better than I did, that's for sure.

I second this.

I like where this thread is going.



Blue Bomber aka Megaman (c) the gods at capcom.
Might do Silent hill next <3

Quote from: fowlie on Oct 24, 2009, 05:27 PM

Everyone on those pages looks really relaxed and not worried or concerned at all. Doop doop doop, gun fight.

Judging by their facial expressions, I believe they are supposed to be mildly retarded.



OH WAO IS LOUD!!! - HURRRR YOU ARE SHOT MEEEE!!!

You read my mind. Ahaha.