ZEST- Seems a welcome back is in order! Always good to see the oldies returning to strut their stuff. It's as if you never left! Your quality seems to have picked up- namely on that first page. I was so struck by Jules intro via his shadow. Total Oogie Boogie feelings coming from that second panel. I especially liked your unique take on your opponents look. Seeing Jules face flop to the side when he leans over, and being posed awkwardly really made watching him a treat panel to panel.
I don't know if Angie's titan girlfriend on page 4 was a nod to the anime, but I'm taking it that way cuz that's hilarious. I do wish there was use of more black or distinguishing factors to make your characters stand out more. As it was, some of the activity kind of bleeds together and it takes a while to figure out what I'm looking at. Like Angie eating that piece of meat panel. Had no idea what that was until I read on.
VIDEO0320- Gosh, its so great to see VOID's resident spooky clown back in the city. The means to get these two tussling was kind of canned (oh snap! chance encounter!), so I hope you come up with a more creative interaction in future comics. Facing off against Leland was definitely an unexpected match, but I think you handled it rather well. It's always fascinating to learn something new about a fighter- namely their sweet clowny powers! Yeesh, after seeing Leland transform into a Jules ghoul it got me to thinking. Can you imagine if he touched every single person in VOID? He could have the city under his thumb for the short span of time everyone was possessed and RULE!
But I digress. Welcome back to comicking. man. Enjoyable battles from the both of yas!
Leland vs. Jules Saphir
Critiques & Comments
# 16
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Jul 16 2014, 01:29 PM
# 15
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Jul 15 2014, 07:13 PM
These comics were so fulfilling I didn't even know they were in the works!! <3
# 14
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Jul 14 2014, 04:54 PM
Interesting stuff, neat all around. Good work both of you. X3
# 13
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Jul 12 2014, 03:46 PM
oh my gosh, I cant believe you both wrote Leland turning into an evil clown, thats so much fun!! but Video, yours sort of left me wanting! like, now what happens?? whats Leland gonna do? what does Jules need to do?? you better not stop battling for a year with him again and leave us hanging! XD I like the colour draining from Leland, you had it mentioned before that it was a power Jules had but I'd never seen it in play before so that was a delight. I liked the action, and it was kind of fun to see Jules get his butt kicked a bit, heh.Your art is really coming alone, the gesture and expression shown here is improved from previous comics although your line weight is still a bit static. ahh, like I just want to fight Jules all over again so I can draw him doing more stuff XD hes such a great character!
Brian, ahh! I love how you draw Jules, this spindly, angular nightmare clown, and the fascinating way he moves! haha your Nightmare Leland is sort of adorable too, and i love how into this whole thing he gets like "oh I'm just dreaming anyway so LETS WRECK SHIT wow I am totally good at this" XD
I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE BOTH OF THESE CHARACTERS AGAIN
Brian, ahh! I love how you draw Jules, this spindly, angular nightmare clown, and the fascinating way he moves! haha your Nightmare Leland is sort of adorable too, and i love how into this whole thing he gets like "oh I'm just dreaming anyway so LETS WRECK SHIT wow I am totally good at this" XD
I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE BOTH OF THESE CHARACTERS AGAIN
# 12
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Jul 12 2014, 12:42 PM
both great comics, congrats guys!
# 11
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Jul 12 2014, 11:21 AM
Sweet, the comics are up! Interesting how both of us ended up with similar plots.
# 10
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Jul 4 2014, 12:01 AM
YES WELCOME BACK BRO
# 9
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Jun 29 2014, 02:06 PM
Haven't seen these two in quite some time. So glad to see you two are still battling with these VOID favorites. Can't wait!
# 8
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Jun 28 2014, 08:30 AM
I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS
# 7
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Jun 27 2014, 01:05 PM
I WAS JUST WONDERING WHEN WE'D SEE JULES AGAIN!
# 6
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Jun 27 2014, 07:13 AM
Polar opposite personality battle: GO
# 5
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Jun 27 2014, 03:36 AM
OH MY BRO
# 4
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Jun 27 2014, 03:24 AM
I can't wait to see how this one turns out seriously.
# 3
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Jun 27 2014, 02:57 AM
This site has had a serious clown deficiency lately.
# 2
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Jun 27 2014, 01:25 AM
oh my god, yes! I havent seen either of these guys in forever!! SO EXCITE
# 1
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Jun 27 2014, 12:56 AM
LELAND'S BACK TO HUG SHIT OUT AND POLITELY ASK FOR NAMES
LET'S ROCK AND ROLL BROS
LET'S ROCK AND ROLL BROS
Regular Match
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2 weeks
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Jul 18th, 2014
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Zest
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video- this comic looks really nice good color. the dialogue is pretty good, a little forced, but the action is really readable and i'm happy there was a bit of an actual fight. excited to see what you have planned!